The Gaping Maw Of Insanity

Can I hide there with you ?

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we'll stay where it's cool together Poet.. thank you for showing me love Brenda

You seem to be keeping your grip and doing it with style, staying where it's cool.  It might still be a struggle ("stretched thin / a wire so very taut / ready to snap").   I know the feeling.  Into the list it goes, right in the shadows.  Excellent work Crim!

thank you Sir Crow for making my day :) with love Crim

i'm with mister sybil on this, i'll come hide out too if i can bring along a lil wine
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"I lie prostrate
naked and bare
begging for some escape"
... the exits are never marked
feeling this one, lovely lady
xoxox

Katja would love your company in the darkened shadows..   please bring some wine and we'll dance with my demons..   I love you lady Brenda

I totally feel you, Crim. All too well.

thank you Sir Hades I feel you too..

with love Crim

Brenda, this is another brilliant dark onslaught of the senses.. totally feel this one.. into the list it goes.. much love, and respect...



Dave

thank you Dave for making my night :)

with love Brenda

thank you beautiful Taryn for showing me love..

with love Brenda

there's serenity in the shadows, Crim. hole in the pockets, can't hold a dream...

always so poetic in your response thank you John..

with love Crim

A tense and vivid dreamscape - you have such skill in drawing readers in and not letting them go - at least I can go now, into the shadows where it's cool

poetically, you are one of my heroes - keep writing :-)

David thank you I'm smiling widely kind soul..

with love Crim

I'm seeing a gypsy who as temporarily lost her way.  Crows are like the ppl who stare/point at her beauty, but then dismiss her. She needs help and those that can refuse to help unless she lets them own her. Her mind is reeling with doubts and fears..but she will survive because she is a gypsy and that what they do.  Wonderful imagery and thoughtfulfullness staying true to her.

lovely one I love your take on who I am and this write thank you from my heart..

with love Crim

The darkness is epic. I feel it calling to me. Very nice Crim.

thank you kindly Xmar :)

with love Crim