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Aborted Seed
I'm an ugly person
a cunt of a bitch
no way around it
I'm twisted
I ink out my evil thoughts
reveling in insanity
though somewhere
there is a conscience
I don't want to spread my disease
like a virus
my thoughts exciting
the dark minds of this world
mayhap turning on the light
to a psychotic psyche
committing crimes inspired by my deadly ink
smearing feces
on the page
I toss and turn in my bed
seeing Bundy's face
in person the man behind the façade
the monster within
feeling the stain
of his victims on my hands
blood I can't run from
the innocent ones
putting down my wicked pen
for the moment
may they rest in peace
not plague by my nightmares anymore
I will not be the mother of a defecated barbarian
there will be no more
born of my demonically desecrated cunt
I've aborted the seed
it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 5th Aug 2015
| Edited 13th Sep 2016
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Re. Aborted Seed
5th Aug 2015 8:50pm
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6th Aug 2015 4:18pm
Re. Aborted Seed
5th Aug 2015 8:51pm
The sins of the mother are never quite destroyed, for better or worse. This reminds me of a short story by Harlan Ellison called "Croatoan." Can't recommend this one highly enough. Same with "Aborted Seed." Great job Crim!
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6th Aug 2015 4:19pm
thank you Sir Crow for an insightful, beautiful comment and book recommendation with love Crim
Re. Aborted Seed
5th Aug 2015 8:51pm
Crim, there is no other poet on this planet quite like you. I have missed reading these aching, compelling poems! This is grim, powerful, exquisite and chilling. I have always thought about that monster that lurked in Bundy's head, how he must have hated but coveted him. We all have something lurking there...
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Re: Re. Aborted Seed
6th Aug 2015 4:20pm
yes I've also wondered the same thing about Bundy.. thank you for such an awesome comment humbling me with love Crim
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Re: Re. Aborted Seed
6th Aug 2015 4:22pm
beautiful Taryn I'm not going lovely one.. just feeling some guilt.. you're right shining a light on my writing not being the cause of what people may do.. thank you sweet heart with love Brenda :)
Re. Aborted Seed
Anonymous
6th Aug 2015 00:34am
Wow Crim......my words are stunned by this powerful piece......emotions I felt thru this one is unreal......it's like I could hear you reading it and crying while i listened......you're the best at these kind of inks......but I think you're too hard on your beautiful soul......luv and hugs xo :)
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6th Aug 2015 4:24pm
Re. Aborted Seed
6th Aug 2015 1:31am
"the innocent ones
putting down my wicked pen
for the moment"
~well, I.. for one [of Many].. sweet-fuckings *Love* your wicked pen!
the innocent ones.. and the setting free of/aborting even.. is pure darkened thought
but your conscience show brightly also.. a change coming, maybe..adore pondering it.
"there will be no more
born of my demonically desecrated cunt
I've aborted the seed "
&...
"it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
~stillborn.. yet... still 'summon-able' Thought.. I'd hope? [she asks, all shiny eyed & hopeful].. eg..;)
cuz.. I get so attached to mine[thots], sinister or not..
the sheer dark smokey presence you birth in this piece is a shiver-tingle in my macabre lil heart..
wicked luvz, LadyCrim.. you are fine by shadows here.. *mwahs
~d
putting down my wicked pen
for the moment"
~well, I.. for one [of Many].. sweet-fuckings *Love* your wicked pen!
the innocent ones.. and the setting free of/aborting even.. is pure darkened thought
but your conscience show brightly also.. a change coming, maybe..adore pondering it.
"there will be no more
born of my demonically desecrated cunt
I've aborted the seed "
&...
"it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
~stillborn.. yet... still 'summon-able' Thought.. I'd hope? [she asks, all shiny eyed & hopeful].. eg..;)
cuz.. I get so attached to mine[thots], sinister or not..
the sheer dark smokey presence you birth in this piece is a shiver-tingle in my macabre lil heart..
wicked luvz, LadyCrim.. you are fine by shadows here.. *mwahs
~d
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6th Aug 2015 6:00pm
lovely d~ thank you for such a beautiful take on this write
showing my dark thoughts love
I live in the shadows it would be hard for me to transition to the light
thank you again for such a thoughtful comment with love Crim
showing my dark thoughts love
I live in the shadows it would be hard for me to transition to the light
thank you again for such a thoughtful comment with love Crim
Re. Aborted Seed
6th Aug 2015 7:46am
demons in the sewers, we hope they stay confined there. hardcore write, Crim...
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6th Aug 2015 6:01pm
Re. Aborted Seed
6th Aug 2015 9:42pm
jaysus lawd brenda!! this is next level macabre indeed...
"I've aborted the seed
it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
^^^^^^^^
... fuck me charles manson, i absolutely loved those lines
xoxox
"I've aborted the seed
it still runs rabid in the sewers
where it was flushed
a stillborn thought let it never see light"
^^^^^^^^
... fuck me charles manson, i absolutely loved those lines
xoxox
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7th Aug 2015 1:18am
beautiful Katja thank you for making me smile so wickedly with your comment ;) love you lady Brenda
Re. Aborted Seed
7th Aug 2015 1:05am
Damn, Mia took the same lines I was bout to quote! :( lol STILL I concur with the masses... Ur 'seed' maybe dark n deadly, but I'll be damned if it ain't grippingly powerful!! :)
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7th Aug 2015 1:18am
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2015 1:18am
Brenda, this is so powerful.. and brilliant.. just love this one.. into the list it goes.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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10th Aug 2015 2:51am
Re. Aborted Seed
Crimson nightmares
Written in every way
The fucking truth unfolded
With all your decay
The beauty of your work is the sincerity of it. I find more truth hiding in darkness than I do in the plain view of light.
The ink is flawless within the cracks it was made
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Re: Re. Aborted Seed
11th Aug 2015 2:48pm
thank you Soul for such a beautifully dark comment..
yes I too take shelter in the shadows :)
with love Crim
yes I too take shelter in the shadows :)
with love Crim
Re. Aborted Seed
16th Aug 2015 00:42am
You astound me every time. My darlin, i happen to find your pen filled with worth, pain, but beauty. Aborted. That seed is not gone until its pain and torment are gone from you. I hope that for you. Truely. 💋
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16th Aug 2015 4:45pm
beautiful Jennifer thank you for the gorgeous, insightful comment..
with love Brenda
with love Brenda