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Blinding Reality
Life has a way of teaching you that your illusion of control and direction, is exactly the depth of things... An illusion, apparition, fantasy of the traditions passed down. Power is intangible, control is unobtainable. What you sow is the ripple it creates outside of your comprehension and you reap what you take as your own
Published 5th Aug 2015
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5th Aug 2015 10:15pm
Intrigued by your thought proccess here. Control absolutely is illusion.
"What you sow is the ripple it creates outside of your comprehension"
Love that statement. So many people are completely unaware the damage they inflict upon others...loved ones included, as they reap. And you're sadly right in that regard too. Sewing good does not mean you will reap it... ever...least not on this earth. Great piece to ponder.
Michael
"What you sow is the ripple it creates outside of your comprehension"
Love that statement. So many people are completely unaware the damage they inflict upon others...loved ones included, as they reap. And you're sadly right in that regard too. Sewing good does not mean you will reap it... ever...least not on this earth. Great piece to ponder.
Michael
6th Aug 2015 4:48am
Thank you so much!! I hope you read and critique more of my work. I'd like to know what my strengths and weaknesses are. And what topics I capture well
6th Aug 2015 00:53am
6th Aug 2015 5:03am
Coming from an experienced and published poet you don't know how much that means!! I do hope you will go and read more of my work and critique them!!;
