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Truth
I gave you attention when no one else was paying.
Boy this isn't a game I'm playing.
My kisses are as slow as the Mississippi,
And as strong as a fifth of whiskey.
My Lips are as sweet as red wine,
But as deadly as a dose of cyanide.
I can make an explosion with my touch,
You wouldn't want to be removed from my clutch.
Ice running through my veins and fire through my bones,
Your world would be rocked like the Flintstones.
Eyes are as blue and peaceful like the oceans wave,
Look deep enough and you become my slave.
Skin as soft as a newborn baby,
Wanna kiss and touch it maybe?
One taste of my love like a drug you'll be hooked,
A room at a rehab center will need to be booked.
Boy this isn't a game I'm playing.
My kisses are as slow as the Mississippi,
And as strong as a fifth of whiskey.
My Lips are as sweet as red wine,
But as deadly as a dose of cyanide.
I can make an explosion with my touch,
You wouldn't want to be removed from my clutch.
Ice running through my veins and fire through my bones,
Your world would be rocked like the Flintstones.
Eyes are as blue and peaceful like the oceans wave,
Look deep enough and you become my slave.
Skin as soft as a newborn baby,
Wanna kiss and touch it maybe?
One taste of my love like a drug you'll be hooked,
A room at a rehab center will need to be booked.
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Re. Truth
4th Aug 2015 1:15am
Skin as soft as a new born baby
wanna kiss and touch it maybe?
I think a very Sexy line
I enjoyed the rhyme and flow
Kinda a smooth stroke :)
k2m
wanna kiss and touch it maybe?
I think a very Sexy line
I enjoyed the rhyme and flow
Kinda a smooth stroke :)
k2m
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Re. Truth
4th Aug 2015 1:20am
Re. Truth
5th Aug 2015 2:29am
"My kisses are as slow as the Mississippi,
And as strong as a fifth of whiskey."
Passion here! Love it.
And as strong as a fifth of whiskey."
Passion here! Love it.
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Re. Truth
5th Aug 2015 12:29pm
Re. Truth
5th Aug 2015 3:14pm
Slow as the Mississippi. Dig that! Some really smooth sexy imagery, some danger, and a touch of humor. 💋 nice ink!
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Re. Truth
5th Aug 2015 3:50pm
Re. Truth
9th Aug 2015 3:20am
Welcome to DU!! BRAVO!!! Sissy...this was excellent.....luv the double lines of meanings.....powerful write......xo :)
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Re. Truth
9th Aug 2015 3:40am
Re. Truth
9th Aug 2015 11:56am
Re. Truth
1st Sep 2015 00:12am
Enjoyed the confident easy way the narrator has of speaking and her confidence. * I gave you attention when no one was paying - love this line and ain't it the truth...the one we gave to when no on else would gets all cocky? COOL
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Re: Re. Truth
1st Sep 2015 3:13am
Re. Truth
28th Oct 2021 12:22pm
dear Sissy
this has the heart of a performance poem
that would also wed well with music
do you perhaps have recordings of you reading your poems ?
a warm smile
silent lotus
this has the heart of a performance poem
that would also wed well with music
do you perhaps have recordings of you reading your poems ?
a warm smile
silent lotus
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Re: Re. Truth
28th Oct 2021 1:23pm
Thank you silent lotus. Never thought about recording myself reading my poems. With my country bumpkin accent it maybe be difficult to understand. Lol.
Sissy 💜💜
Sissy 💜💜