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The Wordsmith
We entrusted sorrows awakening spirits
breathing rhythm beyond any verse, etched
in mortal world to the gleam of diamonds
glittering to Prometheus' heaven
Patchwork of hearts glowed with miracles
brushed with grace and tender strokes
unfurling tapestry dappled with splinters
beneath maelstroms of tears and laughter
Bind with trust, reflecting northern lights
golden memories merged celebrating life
cradling pains from solitary depths of
iridescent pearls, offerings of salts
From seven fulsome seas, brimming
with hope and feathery wrought
in the light of thousand silvery moons
poetry burned, inhaling truth untold
**Submitted about fellow Poet Vee in Comp "Poem about a du user or friend" hosted by IronFears
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Re. The Wordsmith
31st Jul 2015 6:26pm
She'll be flattered, this a beautiful poem about a fantastic poet!! nicely done.
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31st Jul 2015 7:56pm
I'm hoping you're right because I've worked really hard to surprise her with it.
Thank you for Nikki your gracious visit and humbling comment ; )
Thank you for Nikki your gracious visit and humbling comment ; )
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 7:14pm
I've read a few of Vee's poems. . .a "Wordsmith" she is. . .Excellently penned, Mujer. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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31st Jul 2015 7:59pm
Gracias mamacita!
She definitely is and a selfless individual too.
I'm honored by your visit ; )
She definitely is and a selfless individual too.
I'm honored by your visit ; )
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31st Jul 2015 9:10pm
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2015 1:32am
Sexy Lena......this a wonderful tribute to Vee......I'm sure she is more than honored.....enjoyed xo :)
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1st Aug 2015 10:31pm
You have been an incredible soul sister as well my dear! I always appreciate your voice ...xoxo
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Anonymous
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1st Aug 2015 1:34pm
You know that moment when you write a whole paragraph and then suddenly in one instant you press delete and erase the whole thing..well that just happened lol
I guess there aren't enough words to express how happy and grateful I am to have you as my friend and (soul) sister. You are the silver lining that came from such unhappy and unfortunate events and I will always be thankful to have you in my life.
I loved what KateA wrote in her tribute poem and that is just barely touching the surface of who you are as a woman with so much depth, intelligence and heart.
It's good to be in such great company of talented friends who care, Nikki, Devlin, Flower Poetspeak and of course the one and only Mr. Feddeler :)
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1st Aug 2015 10:52pm
This is an incredible honor mamacita. You made me cry with the kind words because I was a huge fan before I became a friend and so your words are an honor.
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1st Aug 2015 4:32pm
Lena I read this in the comp. so stunningly beautiful lovely one
written for a beautiful poetess indeed
you are a truly gifted artist with love Crim :)
written for a beautiful poetess indeed
you are a truly gifted artist with love Crim :)
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1st Aug 2015 10:54pm
Crim, every time you grave my page, you make me smile and light up in a huge way.
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4th Aug 2015 1:58am
Prometheus heaven. My gosh, isnt it incredible the images two words can create, and you do this over and over. My mind was filled with pictures, colours, ideas, even melody as I read this. You are a master at this.
This was a cool poets challenge, I was reminded by Seekingkate in her poem about you, how delicous you are to read. Now I will certainly find this writer and read. I am exited, have not read any of Vees work.
I really love this place, DUP. 💋
This was a cool poets challenge, I was reminded by Seekingkate in her poem about you, how delicous you are to read. Now I will certainly find this writer and read. I am exited, have not read any of Vees work.
I really love this place, DUP. 💋
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4th Aug 2015 3:23pm
Oh my Jennifer what a compliment, thank you! Especially because I often find myself reacting to your ink...lol
I recomment you read at least ONE of Vee's entries and I guarantee, you will not stop there.....she will feed your mind.
I've learned so much from her. She's like an encyclopedia of information.
I recomment you read at least ONE of Vee's entries and I guarantee, you will not stop there.....she will feed your mind.
I've learned so much from her. She's like an encyclopedia of information.
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13th Aug 2015 3:23am
Brilliant! N a very nice honor to pay homage to my sweet poetic friend Vee...which shows you my dear
are a GEM! :)
are a GEM! :)
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13th Aug 2015 12:48pm
Thank you so much Poe! She a wonderful friend indeed. I'm so happy you stopped by carņo. Always appreciate your thoughts. ; )
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15th Aug 2015 1:03pm
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4th Sep 2015 00:17am
Lena...what a gorgeous poem! This poem cries Ireland to me. I picture a couple celebrating their 40th anniversary and have composed these new vows to read to each other in the lush fields during their renewed vows ceremony. EnJOYed.
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6th Sep 2015 4:22am
I love when you describe what you see in ink Shauna.......you are a true visionary ; )
Thisnis about fellow DUP poet Vee. She will amaze you with her words.
Thank you so much for your visit and comments. You always make me smile.
Thisnis about fellow DUP poet Vee. She will amaze you with her words.
Thank you so much for your visit and comments. You always make me smile.
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23rd Oct 2015 10:01pm
Such a magnificent poem, written by a breathtaking woman and wonderful poetess for another gorgeous woman and brilliant poetess. Outstanding write, Lena!
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24th Oct 2015 1:36am
Miss Chi you've been missed !
Thank you so much for your comment and I agree, she is a brilliant and beautiful woman.
Welcome back querida!
Thank you so much for your comment and I agree, she is a brilliant and beautiful woman.
Welcome back querida!
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12th Dec 2015 7:41pm
There is craft, and there is art, and there is that unnamed aptitude that surpasses both. ;)
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2nd Jul 2017 8:46pm
Love this Lena!!!
This vibe makes wanna write recklessly
from mind to hand
from hand to pen
from pen to paper
let it flow!!!!!
This vibe makes wanna write recklessly
from mind to hand
from hand to pen
from pen to paper
let it flow!!!!!
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3rd Jul 2017 4:34pm
Mr. Naajir papi, With your status, you can do whateva you'd like and I bet it would still be amazing! Gracias ; )