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rugiada
rugiada (Italian)
abbattuti il cuore di un colibrì
solo per sentire il tuono
le lacrime nutriti prato
dew
culled a humming bird's heart
just to hear thunder
her tears fed the meadows
Photo credit Daily Kos
abbattuti il cuore di un colibrì
solo per sentire il tuono
le lacrime nutriti prato
dew
culled a humming bird's heart
just to hear thunder
her tears fed the meadows
Photo credit Daily Kos
Published 29th Jul 2015
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29th Jul 2015 5:35pm
29th Jul 2015 11:35pm
Thank you for the comment and RL add ... Poetically I'm trying to get back to writing senryu
and haiku - it helps me stay disciplined
and haiku - it helps me stay disciplined
29th Jul 2015 10:52pm
It's stunning and stops the breath as a hummingbird who crosses your path would.
29th Jul 2015 11:38pm
Thank you so much for the comment ... Fireflies, dragonflies and humming birds, all amazing creatures.
31st Jul 2015 11:32am
30th Jul 2015 1:10am
The taken heart, creating the sound of thunder is a gorgeous image,
I adore your form, as works perfectly in blending bold & gentle emotions!
be well ;)
~d
I adore your form, as works perfectly in blending bold & gentle emotions!
be well ;)
~d
30th Jul 2015 5:31am
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31st Jul 2015 1:13pm
beautiful Lo...i've missed these from you...thanks for bringing them back :)
31st Jul 2015 7:07pm
Thank you dear Kate ... I'm on holiday for about five more weeks and hope to move back into haiku and senryu for a spell
16th Sep 2016 5:54am
Just what I need'd to
end my day,
because I am sure the
meadows felt blest as much,
Beautiful
-Howlings
end my day,
because I am sure the
meadows felt blest as much,
Beautiful
-Howlings
16th Sep 2016 6:16am
