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Where The Real People Live
They're found in the streets
pushing a shopping cart
full of a life forgotten
preferring to sleep
blanketed by the stars
than to be caged by four walls
the whores walking the hoe stroll
calling to the passing cars
with flashing eyes and scantily clad bodies
I've walked those streets
they have been mean and kind to me
in equal measures
the streets still captivate
to this day pull at my core
the ugly places in me
I don't fit in with society
preferring it that way
refined when I choose to be
though it's just a façade
I'm dark on the inside
loving the rough hands
of a man who knows what he's doing
choking me while he fucks my slit
this is when I feel most alive
living life on the edge
is where the real people live
pushing a shopping cart
full of a life forgotten
preferring to sleep
blanketed by the stars
than to be caged by four walls
the whores walking the hoe stroll
calling to the passing cars
with flashing eyes and scantily clad bodies
I've walked those streets
they have been mean and kind to me
in equal measures
the streets still captivate
to this day pull at my core
the ugly places in me
I don't fit in with society
preferring it that way
refined when I choose to be
though it's just a façade
I'm dark on the inside
loving the rough hands
of a man who knows what he's doing
choking me while he fucks my slit
this is when I feel most alive
living life on the edge
is where the real people live
Published 29th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
29th Jul 2015 1:36am
Adds a whole new meaning to "real." It's a dark, subterranean world some chose to inhabit. Says it well.
29th Jul 2015 2:03am
29th Jul 2015 1:43am
WOW, U are such a wordsmith my darling Crim!!!!
I have goosebumps.... i just love this whole piece!!!
In the list!!!
Mwah Chica!!!!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
I have goosebumps.... i just love this whole piece!!!
In the list!!!
Mwah Chica!!!!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
29th Jul 2015 2:04am
beautiful one you made my week smiling wide at you thank you I love you Brenda :)
Anonymous
29th Jul 2015 1:45am
True and heartfelt write Brenda and you're so right, the real people without the glitz and glamour are the ones that truly feel what life is about with all its knocks and bumps.
29th Jul 2015 2:05am
29th Jul 2015 2:45am
"Living on the edge is where the real people live". Love the line because most
of us avoid the edge and are never fully happy: something is lacking.
Thanks for this beautiful and dark inking
of us avoid the edge and are never fully happy: something is lacking.
Thanks for this beautiful and dark inking
29th Jul 2015 2:54am
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29th Jul 2015 3:39am
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beautiful Taryn thank you so much for the love you've shown me and my inking.. sending love and kisses back your way with love Brenda
29th Jul 2015 5:19am
29th Jul 2015 5:34am
thank you Grae for a thoughtful comment and leaving me giggling with your rough sex is good sex indeed ;) with love Crim
29th Jul 2015 8:21am
hardcore tales from the mean streets, Crim. when I cruise thru those neighborhoods, I need you ridin shotgun...
29th Jul 2015 5:03pm
29th Jul 2015 11:31am
I've seen those people, watched them as a child in our neighborhood
n it was obvious they lived a life before they got to where they were....
N yes I can relate to the darkness, I've been there myself... In a closet, a park with no lights, alleyways, etc... lol
n it was obvious they lived a life before they got to where they were....
N yes I can relate to the darkness, I've been there myself... In a closet, a park with no lights, alleyways, etc... lol
29th Jul 2015 5:04pm
29th Jul 2015 1:36pm
You definitelt fit in with that pen girl...... Raw and honest ink. I'm a fan ; )
29th Jul 2015 5:05pm
29th Jul 2015 4:42pm
Life on the streets can be an education. That's where the survivors live and seize the day, finding intensity in the city. And once in awhile they find the perfect fuck to make it all worthwhile even if it's a choking matter. Loved this Crim! "Hello darkness my old friend."
29th Jul 2015 5:06pm
thank you Sir Crow for getting my write and for making me smile with Sound Of Silence reference :) with love Crim
29th Jul 2015 5:40pm
you know i love everything you write, [you could knock out a poem about candy apples & peeling potatoes & it would be amazing], but when you do this... straight shooting, throat punching honesty... when you're serving up just the bones & turning it into a feast; then you're at your damn finest, lovely brenda
xoxox
xoxox
29th Jul 2015 5:47pm
beautiful Katja words fail me your comment touched my heart so.. thank you lovely one for making my morning love Brenda :)
30th Jul 2015 1:46pm
AAAH Crim.... My Lovely Crim... you can feel the heartbeat of life in this poem...
Real Life... with Real People..
Pen Praise!!
XOXO
Fire
Real Life... with Real People..
Pen Praise!!
XOXO
Fire
30th Jul 2015 5:10pm
thank you beautiful Fire for feeling the heart of this write and showing it love.. with love Crim
31st Jul 2015 00:33am
I also live life on the edge - yesterday I ate 4 chocolate cookies - I am not allowed them - I am a chocolate rebel
amazing imagery and view of life and ultimately what makes you feel - excellent and so well written :-)
amazing imagery and view of life and ultimately what makes you feel - excellent and so well written :-)
1st Aug 2015 5:00pm
thank you David for putting a smile on my face with your comment with love Crim :)
7th Aug 2015 10:14pm
Living on the edge is where the real people live. That is the most honest remark ever.
I go through this streets along with you, wondering where it leads to, then I find,
the rough hands of a masterful athlete fucking her slit. You're super talented
Crimson, it only gets better with each ride. Thanks for such a great write.
I go through this streets along with you, wondering where it leads to, then I find,
the rough hands of a masterful athlete fucking her slit. You're super talented
Crimson, it only gets better with each ride. Thanks for such a great write.
7th Aug 2015 11:15pm
