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AM I TOASTED?
WILL I CRUMBLE?
AND FALL APART?
OR AM I JUST
CRUMBY AND STALE
CHEAP WHITE BREAD
WITH A BROWNISH HUE
EVEN THE CHEESY BITS
ARE A BIT FLAKY
AND THE BUTTER
SPREAD TOO THICK
AND FALL APART?
OR AM I JUST
CRUMBY AND STALE
CHEAP WHITE BREAD
WITH A BROWNISH HUE
EVEN THE CHEESY BITS
ARE A BIT FLAKY
AND THE BUTTER
SPREAD TOO THICK
Published 28th Jul 2015
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 9:28pm
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29th Jul 2015 1:06am
AND THE BUTTER
SPREAD TOO THICK
This is good. But the rest may need some work, just as constructive criticism. The breaks are good. The idea is great.
SPREAD TOO THICK
This is good. But the rest may need some work, just as constructive criticism. The breaks are good. The idea is great.
