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I LOST IT
I Lost it
Was I game from the start?
Oh such an innocent heart
surrendered,
unto a cold unfeeling boulder,
of humanity more
barbarian than any have thought.
The failure in the rebel,
against Royalty blooded by
the corruption of men,
innocents tainted,
broken lamb to slaughter
for the laughter of
such wretched leeching
bastards of hell.
I stood my ground,
all for naught,
withstanding countless torment.
the wince of iron,
striking fire,
unto a destroyed soul,
henceforth, realization
piercing through the holes
of my sacrificed purity.
Blackened, to coals,
being lit up by red,
blood dripping the drops,
of crackles, they spark,
anger blinded my hurt
affectionate memories;
they had gone blurred.
Thrown, and discarded,
Though I denied,
i know I'm forgotten,
they want me to rot in chambers,
doomed forever
to my own violated consciousness.
Oh but I hoped,
Kept holding on to that one thread,
And as it failed to mend,
the wounds that had been burn,
torn into the every main nerve
that connected to my brain-dead corpse,
still living and breathing
in the real world,
I snapped out of myself.
I live in the dungeon
of demonic fiends awaiting to tear me to bits.
sulfur suffocating, the smell of death emanating
the thick walls
that encased my withered spirit....
my mind slowly vanished,
into nothing,
but ashes ...
that lingered in a weightless wind.
In the end...
I lost it.
Published 27th Jul 2015
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27th Jul 2015 11:56pm
28th Jul 2015 2:23pm
Thank you very much Hades,... frankly i am sorta surprised
Not quiet sure about this one, but for some reason i liked it
... my block seems to be a stubborn one.
Not quiet sure about this one, but for some reason i liked it
... my block seems to be a stubborn one.
30th Jul 2015 00:53am
6th Aug 2015 2:22pm
28th Jul 2015 2:43am
Dig this one my friend, it is eye openin, as lightning crashes... The wince of iron, striking fire, I like those lines, very good words to describe it all...
"Oh but I hoped,
Kept holding on to that one thread,
And as it failed to mend,
the wounds that had been burn,
torn into the every main nerve
that connected to my brain-dead corpse,
still living and breathing
in the real world,
I snapped out of myself. " Thta may be my favorite stanza, "connected to my brain-dead corpse" dig that part immensely friend... Hope can be dangerous, when it is destroyed, so it feels is the soul also... Been thinkin about that lately, written a few, though not posted here yet, is thus far only on Cosmofunnel... How ya doin friend: wolf
"Oh but I hoped,
Kept holding on to that one thread,
And as it failed to mend,
the wounds that had been burn,
torn into the every main nerve
that connected to my brain-dead corpse,
still living and breathing
in the real world,
I snapped out of myself. " Thta may be my favorite stanza, "connected to my brain-dead corpse" dig that part immensely friend... Hope can be dangerous, when it is destroyed, so it feels is the soul also... Been thinkin about that lately, written a few, though not posted here yet, is thus far only on Cosmofunnel... How ya doin friend: wolf
28th Jul 2015 2:25pm
Hi there!!!
I'm doing well thanks for asking,
just penning through a block that has anchor where it shouldn't be..
I'm glad you enjoyed this bit here.
Thank you very much
^_^
I'm doing well thanks for asking,
just penning through a block that has anchor where it shouldn't be..
I'm glad you enjoyed this bit here.
Thank you very much
^_^
29th Jul 2015 3:19am
6th Aug 2015 2:24pm
thank you very much Kavic ... I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
That's mostly why i write. I like the fact that people can relate to what I felt, feel or going through.
That's mostly why i write. I like the fact that people can relate to what I felt, feel or going through.
