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Soul Stones
I don't close my eyes
on heavy jade lids.
Fantasy ends ..there
in spaces between
cool catechumen fend,
plied insomniatic plea.
My deprivation, in need.
I am.. eyes veined wide
at moment.
Transcending.. free..
blink.. blink.. See.
Debating the debatable.
the mass index of Me..
Angsty soul screams..
a time delivered Please.
Let it be vowed Unity..
when morn's flight
cracks open your eyes.
see.. see.. See!
your dark queen,
crown~unworthy
of foul fended dreams.
All privy wards, stones thrown,
cast far now, regally atoned.
Eloquently deemed
as forgiven liberation..
stones are set Free~
Embracing only-
deep shadow debris,
scatter~shattered, dark queen
on knees of daydream..
Homaging, always..
Truth's blatant breeze.
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Re. Soul Stones
27th Jul 2015 11:20pm
I really like this one, love.
"when morn's flight
cracks open your eyes. "
Would that all epiphanies brought peace with their insight. Alas, some only open us up to a world of torment. The things I wish I never saw.
You poem flows sweetly and shows you still know how to dream. I hope you never lose that quality.
Michael
"when morn's flight
cracks open your eyes. "
Would that all epiphanies brought peace with their insight. Alas, some only open us up to a world of torment. The things I wish I never saw.
You poem flows sweetly and shows you still know how to dream. I hope you never lose that quality.
Michael
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
27th Jul 2015 11:42pm
We all do see what we want m'dear.. I will open-heartedly wait for peace, as truth is only in the eye of the beholder.
ty you for your insights on both Michael.. hugs
eyes open,
~T
ty you for your insights on both Michael.. hugs
eyes open,
~T
Re. Soul Stones
Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 00:45am
You have such a way with words, it is almost like a foreign language. Through all of this posting I only see eternal hope.
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 1:56am
Bless your poetic heart fer reading the forgiveness and hope
fer truce here.. I was hopeful.. now.. just accepting.
Eyes open seem to be the best way to achieve heart peace..
ty fer takin' time on me m'friend!
smiles to you fer such humbling words ;)
~d
fer truce here.. I was hopeful.. now.. just accepting.
Eyes open seem to be the best way to achieve heart peace..
ty fer takin' time on me m'friend!
smiles to you fer such humbling words ;)
~d
Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 1:21am
Your wording and rhyme are so beautiful, I just wish I had such a beautiful use of the language.
I read you over and over again hoping it is contagious. Loved it
I read you over and over again hoping it is contagious. Loved it
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 2:08am
I am all smiles fer such thots, poet, enjoy your writes also & think we all learn from each other!
so ..we shall continue the process, yes? (yes) ;)
hope you have a great eve & always appreciate seein' you here!
~d
so ..we shall continue the process, yes? (yes) ;)
hope you have a great eve & always appreciate seein' you here!
~d
Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 1:56am
Re: Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 2:11am
Thank~you's sweetly, I am ever~grateful to hear from you..
much appreciation & a shiny eve your way m'friend ;)
~d
much appreciation & a shiny eve your way m'friend ;)
~d
Re. Soul Stones
Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 4:00am
Miss DarkSighs. . .Referring to yourself as a "Queen" takes a lot of gusto, and I must respect and bow down to you for it. . .You opened something here that has touched a little bit of sentimental nerve with me because I've always been sort of a darkened daydreamer. . .but hey, another story for another time. . .Until then. . .reap your comments. . .Well deserved. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 00:06am
Hihi's, most esteemed LadyDevlin! so much thanx fer stoppin in..
bowing right back on ur eloquent daydreaming self..& smirkin at the gusto.. I soo *crave that today. lol.
was queen-no capital, to my heartwish.. but.. life does blow hard on wishes at moment.
eeks & humble appreciation m'dear, will await those stories! ;)
~d
bowing right back on ur eloquent daydreaming self..& smirkin at the gusto.. I soo *crave that today. lol.
was queen-no capital, to my heartwish.. but.. life does blow hard on wishes at moment.
eeks & humble appreciation m'dear, will await those stories! ;)
~d
Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 4:05am
Re: Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 2:55am
gracious~me.. lookie who it be,
my ever favorite Sirz o' D!
grand & wicked to have you m'dear..
dream~luckees on both of we's ;)
hughug & ty,
~d
my ever favorite Sirz o' D!
grand & wicked to have you m'dear..
dream~luckees on both of we's ;)
hughug & ty,
~d
Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 8:01am
A wonderful write, to many deep moments to talk about them all. Immaculate write miss darkness! My best wishes are with you.
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 3:00am
Hihi's, my sweetest poet friend.. you make my day on presence alone..
add your touching comments at my deep soul-searchins.. equals great hugs misters, ty everly!
may your eve be a'blaze!
~d
add your touching comments at my deep soul-searchins.. equals great hugs misters, ty everly!
may your eve be a'blaze!
~d
Re. Soul Stones
28th Jul 2015 6:46pm
"When morn's flight / cracks open your eyes." This could be a collection of thoughts sorted out when waking up then put to paper with astonishing effect. Maybe after a few cups of coffee. Fine work baby. Nothing to sigh about at all.
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 3:07am
Here~here's & coffee tips to you sweetie..by *bucket, she says..lol
upon waking, I always have my notepad (dating myself, surely) ready to capture a verse, line, or word..
you have a knack of spinning positives on woes & I definitely appreciate!
dark sparkles to your nite ;)
~d
upon waking, I always have my notepad (dating myself, surely) ready to capture a verse, line, or word..
you have a knack of spinning positives on woes & I definitely appreciate!
dark sparkles to your nite ;)
~d
Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 1:01am
Re: Re. Soul Stones
29th Jul 2015 3:11am
My jaded pen thanx you so much dearest..
'insanely'.. <~ I hold in high regards, as I do your support..
keeps rockin the verses & I shall be ever~reading ;)
hugs man,
~d
'insanely'.. <~ I hold in high regards, as I do your support..
keeps rockin the verses & I shall be ever~reading ;)
hugs man,
~d
Re. Soul Stones
31st Jul 2015 4:56am
I remember reading in the Aphorisms of Patanjali he would refer to "stones" that would be tossed into the water that would disrupt the clarity of our awareness. Of course this was the clarity of which we can peer into our deepest self. Are they murky with debris or taken care to have purified water?
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Re: Re. Soul Stones
31st Jul 2015 6:36am
Interesting. ..of Patanjali's life .. I've read some on "insurmountable barriers" & my
fav fun fact wud be..when he reduced a few to ashes, by fire from his mouth.
definitely wud need to identify the murky & purified plus stone frequency status..must read more
to ponder properly..lol..but is provoking of soul thought, ty & much appreciate the feedback ..;)
g'nite m'dear
~d
fav fun fact wud be..when he reduced a few to ashes, by fire from his mouth.
definitely wud need to identify the murky & purified plus stone frequency status..must read more
to ponder properly..lol..but is provoking of soul thought, ty & much appreciate the feedback ..;)
g'nite m'dear
~d
Re. Soul Stones
17th Aug 2015 11:31pm
Re. Soul Stones
20th Sep 2015 10:53pm
The title I am loving thru & thru,
I love the direction you took this
babe, yes stones..yes boulders
can feel them at the bottom of
the soul's river...
Everflowing, shall you never stop
my beauty.. Kisses & hugs to your
deeps
I love the direction you took this
babe, yes stones..yes boulders
can feel them at the bottom of
the soul's river...
Everflowing, shall you never stop
my beauty.. Kisses & hugs to your
deeps
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