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In A Lifetime
(inspired by the song.....
"Help Me Understand"
Trace Adkins)
"once in a lifetime you'll open up your heart"
once in a lifetime
someone holds your heart
in an embrace that lasts forever
will feel you holding me tonight
snuggled up in your blanket of luv
as our hearts open up to one another
ocean between us disappears in darkness
warm breeze softly guides my thoughts to you
can feel yours back as warmth whirls around me
sweet luving soul that luvs me true
want to hold you not just for tonight
but all nights till forever is silent
feeling your lips kissing my breasts
vibrating thru fragrant skin to a heart locket
which holds our sweet luv that cuddles me
yes my luv.....
we took a chance opening our hearts to each other
what a sweet special embrace they do endure
"once in a lifetime you'll open up your heart"
You & I.....in a lifetime heart embrace
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
"Help Me Understand"
Trace Adkins)
"once in a lifetime you'll open up your heart"
once in a lifetime
someone holds your heart
in an embrace that lasts forever
will feel you holding me tonight
snuggled up in your blanket of luv
as our hearts open up to one another
ocean between us disappears in darkness
warm breeze softly guides my thoughts to you
can feel yours back as warmth whirls around me
sweet luving soul that luvs me true
want to hold you not just for tonight
but all nights till forever is silent
feeling your lips kissing my breasts
vibrating thru fragrant skin to a heart locket
which holds our sweet luv that cuddles me
yes my luv.....
we took a chance opening our hearts to each other
what a sweet special embrace they do endure
"once in a lifetime you'll open up your heart"
You & I.....in a lifetime heart embrace
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All Rights Reserved
Published 26th Jul 2015
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26th Jul 2015 11:31pm
28th Jul 2015 9:52pm
Sweet Brenda......thank you for always leving me a smile upon my page.......xo :)
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27th Jul 2015 00:38am
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28th Jul 2015 9:58pm
Hey Mr. PM......always good to see you...glad you liked this......thank your for delivering a smile......xo :)
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27th Jul 2015 2:23am
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Sweet S......you always make me smile with your warm kindness.....thank you for feeling my words......luv and hugs to you sweet soul......xo :)
27th Jul 2015 4:54am
this ink will stand priceless for a lifetime... what a beauty you created :D
28th Jul 2015 10:05pm
Awe Magic......thank you for your sacred words.......ap appreciate your visits.......luv and hugs xo :)
27th Jul 2015 6:38am
28th Jul 2015 10:06pm
Hi Solomon......I'm glad this had an impact of positive......thank your for stopping by my way.....you've brought a smile upon my pag xo :)
27th Jul 2015 3:05pm
I completely agree my dear and what a beautiful touch you gave it here my love........reading you there's so much tranquility, peace and beauty ; )
28th Jul 2015 10:22pm
Sexy Lady.......you're words being peacefulness to my heart......i luved writing this one.....every time I heard the song the words fluttered in my soul.....it's actually a sad song thru out...but the first part of it is just so beautiful and grips my heart......sweet luv your way.....xo :)
27th Jul 2015 5:48pm
Sweet, tender and beautifully written. Loyal too! "A lifetime heart embrace." This one has staying power, Flower. Great job!
28th Jul 2015 10:30pm
Sweet Crow......you always make me smile.......i luv when you come my way.....my heart embrace I mean to forever last......thank you sweet friend......xo :)
Anonymous
28th Jul 2015 4:07am
Trace Adkins. . .Now there's a voice. . .A great country artist you chose here to improvise with the making of this poem. . .My [cowgirl] hat's off to you, Miss Flower!. . .Loved it. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
28th Jul 2015 10:34pm
Ooooo Dev....yes yes.....he's awesome.....one of a kind voice......thank you for the tip of your hat......I tip my pen back to you with returned respect and luv......xo :)
30th Jul 2015 6:37am
31st Jul 2015 2:47am
Hi John.....honored to see you upon my page......you're so right "once and forever"......appreciate you stopping by with kind words.....xo :)
2nd Aug 2015 4:55am
Im not a usual fan of pretty love poetry, my problem not others. But this was really nice doll. I liked it a lot. 💋 happy to run across you, will be reading more.
2nd Aug 2015 5:43pm
Hi Jen......good morning......I'm very honored you came my way......appreciate you taking the time to leave a smile upon my page......glad you enjoyed this piece......will be crossing paths with you again.....xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 2:50am
Once in a lifetime is all it takes when love is there between the two of you. Nice loving thoughts.
4th Aug 2015 3:41am
You're absolutely right Scooter......once is all it takes......it's a beautiful thing to share your heart and soul with one who luvs you back.....thank you xo :)
