Striking sharp metaphoric yearn, greatly penned.. of the heal that duz never really heal.. appreciate the deep root of the crave & the slicing effects of wanting, captured so rightly! great day to you ;) ~d
Appreciate the succinctness of your piece. I don't completely appreciate the sentiment, I myself though have been writing shorter and shorter pieces for poignancy.
To say so much in so few words! I agree with darksighs, it's sharp and clever metaphoric writing. Having known so many and seeing it wreck relationships, it resonates. So succinct.