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My Bestie's Cherry
I wanna straight melt her.. moaning yin~tight astutes,
inside my mouth(y) rhymed verse.. of soft girly hurts.
I find her on tummy.. golden angel asleep,
quietly now, I silent~creep...
My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~
In a hot body slide ..forcing her onto side,
heat greeting sleep's perky surprise..
'lapping long suckled cries ..my face firm 'tween globed sighs,
loving her flesh.. jade eyes on eyes.
Rolling her open on back ..mouth kisses attack..
sleepy thighs part to long legs slack,
as she draws those so~small fists back.
We are curve on curve perfect in moistened fervor,
with pierced steel licks to pisces wrist~
inflaming, ..as allure.. beg.. dip.
Pearls bloom in her seep at my firmest palm presses,
wet tips weighing bars by her breath..
At my need to soft squeeze.. liquid meets hand's caress,
my other, bold~stroking 'fetish'.
Cream juices slow~drip 'tween fingertips .. down both wrists,
lips follow.. sharp tugging in nips.
I finger those tight spots to bare whimpers at choke,
bring her ..as wet arches of soak..
beautiful.. all gorgeous.. her moan.
Tightest blush line full~licked, my two pinkies push deep,
wiggling wicked.. inside pulsed plea.
Give sexy lip thrashes ..savage smacks.. nub gnashes,
my smooth whisper, lapping.. lashing..
Bringing her sweet 'V' in fay crescendos of cream..
As I swallow silken need..my 'bestie' sighs, pleased.
Eyes still in my prize, I smile.. continue slow feed.
Published 25th Jul 2015
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25th Jul 2015 1:23am
Mmmmmmmgoodness gracious this was delicious!! lol all I wanted was to SEE this pink on pink action love n up close!! lol n yea Pisces rocks! I should know becuz I'm a Pisces lol
25th Jul 2015 4:10am
*lmsao.. I am so glad I painted such a good pic of, man..
my feisty Pisces bestie was a graceful muse fer the
pen-maulins, hugs & tyty fer the read m'dears ;)
be..O'.Just be bad, won't waste breath tellin' ya otherwise.. ha's
~d
my feisty Pisces bestie was a graceful muse fer the
pen-maulins, hugs & tyty fer the read m'dears ;)
be..O'.Just be bad, won't waste breath tellin' ya otherwise.. ha's
~d
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25th Jul 2015 4:18am
"IT'S CONFIRMED - *Gigglegasps!!* - For me! For meeeeeeee!"
~toe~curls at your delight my Sweet Taryn.. Great unholies, was this fun.. you may book an overnite!!
hot thx fer allowin the poetic *pop.. I feel gawddamn special.. lol *mwahs
you lil pisces minx, luvz everly on you.. feel you at my back always m'luvely.
tucked 'neath ur pillow.. just in case, k?!.. wicked teehe's,
~d
~toe~curls at your delight my Sweet Taryn.. Great unholies, was this fun.. you may book an overnite!!
hot thx fer allowin the poetic *pop.. I feel gawddamn special.. lol *mwahs
you lil pisces minx, luvz everly on you.. feel you at my back always m'luvely.
tucked 'neath ur pillow.. just in case, k?!.. wicked teehe's,
~d
25th Jul 2015 2:14am
feel like a fly on the wall watching the steamy sexy moment hehe... amazing hot ink darksighs ^^
25th Jul 2015 4:53am
Mista~Magics, so stellar of you to *buzz in fer a read.. ;)
hot pens think alike & I am grateful to have you here m'friend!
'a voyeur fly' is a grand idea, I must say.. *smirk/giggle
be well, you's,
~d
hot pens think alike & I am grateful to have you here m'friend!
'a voyeur fly' is a grand idea, I must say.. *smirk/giggle
be well, you's,
~d
25th Jul 2015 3:24am
THAT IS HOT AND BEAUTIFULLY SEXY///WHERE CAN I FIND THAT??
Thanks for the images,, so clear
Thanks for the images,, so clear
25th Jul 2015 5:05am
Hello's mister, ty fer gracin me w/you presence, awesome to have you!
And find..? hmm..rofl.. sending u irish luckees on finding your kickass bestie dearest!
sweetest thanx fer takin time on me, appreciate it always,
~d
And find..? hmm..rofl.. sending u irish luckees on finding your kickass bestie dearest!
sweetest thanx fer takin time on me, appreciate it always,
~d
Anonymous
25th Jul 2015 6:34am
Wow, this really carries the reader along for the ride. Sensualizing stuff.
25th Jul 2015 9:18am
I'm so pleased to see you here.. warm thanks, you, fer sweet comment!
best wishes to your eve/morn..tyty..;)
~d
best wishes to your eve/morn..tyty..;)
~d
25th Jul 2015 6:54am
I am beyond speechless..
This was beyond any verbal appraise I could muster.... My , My, My, My....
I truly thank you for writing this and know I cherish and feel every, single word.
Simply breathtaking
This was beyond any verbal appraise I could muster.... My , My, My, My....
I truly thank you for writing this and know I cherish and feel every, single word.
Simply breathtaking
25th Jul 2015 9:26am
You have evoked much smile, sweetie.. my most humble thanx fer joining me ;)
appreciate your "cherish".. is a very touching comment.. sendin you hugs!
be well!
fondest curtsy,
~d
appreciate your "cherish".. is a very touching comment.. sendin you hugs!
be well!
fondest curtsy,
~d
25th Jul 2015 7:56am
Ahhhhhh... ;-*
Both of you?!
Ahhh, darksighs, luv... I'll be back. I've somewhat to take care of first... ;-*
Both of you?!
Ahhh, darksighs, luv... I'll be back. I've somewhat to take care of first... ;-*
25th Jul 2015 9:33am
O' ha.. lil lip bite & the innocent shiny eyes.. lmsao*
just luv havin u, Lady*S of my heart.. you caught me w/ hand in the.. um.. everything ..lol..
so Iwill save blush(what arrre those?) .. & tell you how pleasing it is to have you peek in!
always hot dark kisses fer you, my beauty.. so cute u are in reply..& fun play, this was..
next sleepover will be in cali.. ur on my sexy list darlins..
hug n curtsies, so so low,
~d
just luv havin u, Lady*S of my heart.. you caught me w/ hand in the.. um.. everything ..lol..
so Iwill save blush(what arrre those?) .. & tell you how pleasing it is to have you peek in!
always hot dark kisses fer you, my beauty.. so cute u are in reply..& fun play, this was..
next sleepover will be in cali.. ur on my sexy list darlins..
hug n curtsies, so so low,
~d
25th Jul 2015 4:23pm
I said I'd be back, luv, and I am. :-* I had to come back and NOT read the poem again before commenting.
Holy scorching honeypots, luv! Ohhhhh, to be with thee and she (yes, I know I'm torturing the language ;-p)
Thank you for this particular brand of torment. Mmm...I'm gonna have to go do somewhat about this again... ;-*
Holy scorching honeypots, luv! Ohhhhh, to be with thee and she (yes, I know I'm torturing the language ;-p)
Thank you for this particular brand of torment. Mmm...I'm gonna have to go do somewhat about this again... ;-*
26th Jul 2015 5:58pm
Ahh.. still slaying my heart, Lady*S..You do realize the explosion of honeypots & cherries I hope..*yumms
*image branded* in my head now.. sweetly thankin' you fer that luscious tidbit!
lol.. never a torture unwelcome frm u darlins, ty ever fondly ;)
hugs n luvstuffs,
~d
*image branded* in my head now.. sweetly thankin' you fer that luscious tidbit!
lol.. never a torture unwelcome frm u darlins, ty ever fondly ;)
hugs n luvstuffs,
~d
25th Jul 2015 2:47pm
I know if I'd'a been born female I'd definitely be lesbian....asamattafact, a few too many years ago, I was honored to have been appointed an 'honorary lesbian' by a bi-sexual (female) 'friend'.....one of my greatest (tho little known) achievements....sadly, this dear person died quite young of goddamn cancer, also long ago.
26th Jul 2015 6:01pm
" 'honorary lesbian' by a bi-sexual (female) 'friend'..."
~just giving you wows here, best friends of all, I'd imagine..
proves wicked skills fer a girly to dubb you this way!
hugs & awws Sirz o D.. I am ever agrin when you visit my smuttie~writ pages ;)
~d
~just giving you wows here, best friends of all, I'd imagine..
proves wicked skills fer a girly to dubb you this way!
hugs & awws Sirz o D.. I am ever agrin when you visit my smuttie~writ pages ;)
~d
Anonymous
25th Jul 2015 3:26pm
Whoa! Kickass poetry on the fem side, and lick, curl, and all manner of shenanigans went into the writing and absorbing of this "girly" piece of action. Yesssss!
26th Jul 2015 6:06pm
Sweetest thanx hun.. I am in fond grin to have you reading on
my page, fancy of you to have me smilin' from your comment also!
Gal drama excluded, there are some stellar besties out there ;)
lol.. "shenanigans".. yeps & in heated plenty..
take care n hughug misters,
~d
my page, fancy of you to have me smilin' from your comment also!
Gal drama excluded, there are some stellar besties out there ;)
lol.. "shenanigans".. yeps & in heated plenty..
take care n hughug misters,
~d
25th Jul 2015 7:32pm
Save some for me! It might be presumptuous to suggest a three way so I'll hold my tongue. You and your bestie have made my morning Darksighs and I'll be reading this later for further consideration. I love the taste of cherry...
26th Jul 2015 6:12pm
Sir crow.. you've made my damn day So sweetly by comment.. ty kindly m'dear..
tell me of this consideration aspect.. we gotsa have our besties backs..n all else, yes?
She was a perfect sport fer allowing me the pen maulin..
you rock at comment misters, glad that you enjoyed & always humbled by your read!
great day to you ;)
~d
tell me of this consideration aspect.. we gotsa have our besties backs..n all else, yes?
She was a perfect sport fer allowing me the pen maulin..
you rock at comment misters, glad that you enjoyed & always humbled by your read!
great day to you ;)
~d
25th Jul 2015 9:18pm
so creamy in the delicious erotic details.. so beautifully written with a true poetic artists flair.. with love Crimsin
26th Jul 2015 6:16pm
Most excellent poetess, ty so kindly fer visiting my page, Lady Crimsin.. !
I am ever grateful for such complimenting words..& adore your pen also ;)
shiny days to you sweetie,
~d
I am ever grateful for such complimenting words..& adore your pen also ;)
shiny days to you sweetie,
~d
26th Jul 2015 5:33pm
oooooooh i've missed the warm gush of your pen, darling sighs
how very devilish you are here
how very devilish you are here
26th Jul 2015 6:52pm
Oh darlin K.. sooo miss~missed ur sweet lil arse & pen, sissy!
sweet Taryn was a doll to stand in here;)
crazy hugs n luvz.. been too long.. mayhap now.. your faithful T & T's
can write together wif you? O' what fun then.. you're so next.. *cackle..
luvzu lady.. ty fer visits, ..
mwahs
~d
sweet Taryn was a doll to stand in here;)
crazy hugs n luvz.. been too long.. mayhap now.. your faithful T & T's
can write together wif you? O' what fun then.. you're so next.. *cackle..
luvzu lady.. ty fer visits, ..
mwahs
~d
26th Jul 2015 10:11pm
hehe yea, i've been in toormakeady (pretending its vital to my dissertation)
bring it on ladies ;)
bring it on ladies ;)
26th Jul 2015 10:39pm
26th Jul 2015 6:32pm
"My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
Know just how sneaky u can be in the middle of the night, love...specially when tempted like this. Shud have issues with Taryn here how could I possibly with such beautiful imagery painted here, and her being the inspiration. :)
"Pearls bloom in her seep at my firmest palm presses,
wet tips weighing bars by her breath..
At my need to soft squeeze.. liquid meets hand's caress,
my other, bold~stroking 'fetish'.
Cream juices slow~drip 'tween fingertips .. down both wrists,
lips follow.. sharp tugging in nips. "
Whole poem is priceless but that stanza rocks! I daresay you took this challenge beyond any expectation. Damn near perfect in its elegance and grace...sexy and daring as well. I think next you and Taryn should duet together. Consider that my challenge to you both.
Always wanted to see *this side of you babe...thanks much for the peek.
Evercherishing you.
Michael
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
Know just how sneaky u can be in the middle of the night, love...specially when tempted like this. Shud have issues with Taryn here how could I possibly with such beautiful imagery painted here, and her being the inspiration. :)
"Pearls bloom in her seep at my firmest palm presses,
wet tips weighing bars by her breath..
At my need to soft squeeze.. liquid meets hand's caress,
my other, bold~stroking 'fetish'.
Cream juices slow~drip 'tween fingertips .. down both wrists,
lips follow.. sharp tugging in nips. "
Whole poem is priceless but that stanza rocks! I daresay you took this challenge beyond any expectation. Damn near perfect in its elegance and grace...sexy and daring as well. I think next you and Taryn should duet together. Consider that my challenge to you both.
Always wanted to see *this side of you babe...thanks much for the peek.
Evercherishing you.
Michael
26th Jul 2015 6:36pm
Michael-loves.. it means much for you to comment.. know that!
ty fer smooth critique of.. u know I want that part too ;)
and eg of wicked delight.. no I can never let you sleep without maulins
Your challenge has been much discussed & just cuz you mentioned it..my Virgo
will be tussling sweet Taryn up.. er.. um Askin' here to write soon..yays n *eg
everloves you, naughty & nice,
~T..
ty fer smooth critique of.. u know I want that part too ;)
and eg of wicked delight.. no I can never let you sleep without maulins
Your challenge has been much discussed & just cuz you mentioned it..my Virgo
will be tussling sweet Taryn up.. er.. um Askin' here to write soon..yays n *eg
everloves you, naughty & nice,
~T..
29th Jul 2015 2:47pm
In my top hat and train conductor coat, I blew my whistle whilst ingesting your words. Two velvet V's entwined twas too much for my tongue. Beautiful.
30th Jul 2015 4:03am
Hihi's misters D.. sweet thanx fer stopping by!
So.. my Bestie & I both agree that you have *the hottest comment w/ your "Two velvet V's..
~We discussed..and results are..*omfg & swoon*.. lol... Ty fer taking time.. it's much appreciated m'friend ;)
twinkled eve's to you,
~d
So.. my Bestie & I both agree that you have *the hottest comment w/ your "Two velvet V's..
~We discussed..and results are..*omfg & swoon*.. lol... Ty fer taking time.. it's much appreciated m'friend ;)
twinkled eve's to you,
~d
31st Jul 2015 4:12am
FTW - a boobie prize! I have an unopened bottle of Absinthe that awaits your twin lips. Antares thrice smiled.
