A Tale of Kissed Peace

This is an interesting piece, and I had to read it a few times to "catch the language" - which I am not I entirely did. But the language is beautiful on its own. The Queen is a noble person, it sounds and that she has been dishonored at times, however, still maintains her integrity in search of someone who is as integral as she is. This is what I understood. Nice poem, darksighs.

So many thanku's for the reread on language, I read mainly olde texts & just realized I do tend to pick it up & pen it back out.. makes you exceptional m'friend, for takin' time on me, ty. ;)
You missed none of the key factors/essence here & I'm grateful(smilin, even)..
'believes it shud be about honor & forgiveness in love ;)
have a great nite poet, much respect,
~d

This is heartwrenching in every line... your sadness of soul exuding throughout.  The terms star-crossed and ill-fated both come to mind here as it's clear both love each other very much, and yet are the cause to each other's pain whether or not consciously aware of it.  Not sure if I believe in happy endings any longer, but I am hoping one still arrives for this beautiful queen, whether or not I can be part of it.  I will always love you.       Michael

You have always read the base of my soul rightly. Michael..
sometimes small conflict & views must be met at middle and
respected/forgiven. 'you & I'-..always stars crossed.. there's
another poem there m'thinks, ty, my evermuse..
I shall start scrawling..;)
everlove & shiny wishes on you m'heart,
~d

Beautiful wording, even if the meaning eludes me here and there.  It does seem to be a tragic romance.  "Falsely staked her to break prided soul."  She might have been caught in a witch hunt but retained some dignity even as the flames rose.  Stoned Prince could share some attributes with Torquemada.  This is fine work and well worth a few readings.

You have me chuckling, all devious, o'here Sir Crow..
so humbling to have you on my page, it means much!

I really adore your insightful witch view, as witch & Queen just *happen to be one & the same..
I appreciate what you seen in the forgiving of all with love at end, ur take is a gorgeous view!)
try writing open-ended fer just this, enjoy all takes on...is also why I enjoy entendres you depart
 in sum pieces. stellar comment(er), you are!
 take care,
~d

 Just very lovely ma friend; the whole o it... First stanza reads calmly to me, though much is goin on there...
"Stoned Prince grimly resides at SunCringe,
versus Queen of un'Caped defenses..
His woven uncouth, flawed lullabies,
'sinnuendos'.. 'top darkened 'tell why's'..
Her mourning feat still grants Kiss of Peace
on lakes of gypsum, down swan~fed cheeks." Lies, sweetly said, seems to be very convincing twould seem by the Stoned Prince o SunCringe...  The Queen seems to see past all o it, and the Stones Charm... Lies, gossip, darkness an perverse nature surround the Stones Prince... The queen ever prideful, heart breaking in face of all the sweetly told lies, does she turn the cheek, mayhaps, but for how long...
For somereason, readin it, he reminds me of the Tabloids, unbelievable claims abotu his version of truths that he is tryin to sell the queen... The Queen, while the Queen remains true in seeing through his images and falseness... Course, I could just be high an seein into things darkly lit backwards hehehe... love ya my friend, and take good care: wolf

Unholy wows, Eddie.. ty fer takin time on me darlins!
You are so rightly reading calm within the bustle of the Queen's heartstrings. We both know that at end of day love just *is.. any woe aside. I so-see it in ur worx as I read...O' lies/gossip & darkness, spot on, man!
aaand *lm(s)ao.. mayhap I *had toked a bit a'fore writing so you'da read proper either way..(ha's)
ty everly m'friend, luvz havin u, hughug,
~d

Falsely staked her to break prided soul,
carotid bleed shakes trusted heart~hold..
"Light's Eternal~ties ..unbind control;
Stellar reign weeps as innocence speaks..
Everlove, beyond intended hurt,
no matter the years 'tween death and birth..
be truest of a Queen's honest worth. "

The touch of unsaid & unseen beauty reigns within every line of this piece, but the above is the grasping in the mind, heart & soul. Lovely, must read again though my lungs clutches inside my cage.

beautifully written to the next level... a pleasure to read

this DS...pulled me under...that's how mesmerizing your words are..I actually sunk into this poem..left me speechless....

This is just simply such a cool piece!! Left me with a smile