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ballade noire
she speaks of love as cruel craving;
leave her not un’tortured
her throat, an ivory tower: how close,
the terror of a clutch. how close to un’breathing
public commode: in the ceiling, one flickering bulb.
used condoms, scattered about –
undoor’d cubicle; splintered glory hole
inside her skull: Sibelius violins;
ghosts in monastic robes dance, unrhythm’d;
burning twigs hacked from a pallid birch.
the air is languid; the hermitage awaits –
‘free me.’ she demands it
sweat-dew’d tits. rigid, areolate spikes:
her tremors, induced by lycan bites.
her hands twist in his black tangles –
his mouth pilfers
her legs are urged apart; she accommodates.
labored hand encroaches. steel fingers writhe;
the scrape of an iron ring.
her cunt is taken: unmercy’d
she grunts, devolves to a lynx in heat.
her nails gouge thin red lines
in rugged shoulders
he surges; and grows, as a man will.
who is no longer a man:
but Priapus, cast in mortal flesh
double scor; arid impaling –
like rubbing genitals against a brick wall
Published 19th Jul 2015
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19th Jul 2015 2:44am
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19th Jul 2015 3:37am
Most heated weave of grecian impalement & unleash..
and sweet gawds, you've astounded my senses, SirJ,
"the terror of a clutch. how close to un’breathing "
~in luvz w/this line, a magickal expression of..
curtsies to your excellent pen of everlast, this eve..
~d
and sweet gawds, you've astounded my senses, SirJ,
"the terror of a clutch. how close to un’breathing "
~in luvz w/this line, a magickal expression of..
curtsies to your excellent pen of everlast, this eve..
~d
19th Jul 2015 5:38am
wow you had me surprised and spectacularly so...love the different energy...
19th Jul 2015 6:42am
Ahhh, JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Such savage, feral uncontainment... ;-* What wild delights here unfold!
Ahhh, the madness that love can be, luv; tis nigh too sacrosanct too behold. :-*
Such savage, feral uncontainment... ;-* What wild delights here unfold!
Ahhh, the madness that love can be, luv; tis nigh too sacrosanct too behold. :-*
19th Jul 2015 7:20am
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19th Jul 2015 10:34am
19th Jul 2015 6:19pm
That last line makes me cringe a bit but otherwise enjoyed this. Both sordid and sublime.
19th Jul 2015 8:45pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2015 8:54pm
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19th Jul 2015 9:38pm
one day I can say I knew him when!!
Johnny Rotten, U are a genius with pen in hand...
always Love your thoughts...
Love
Zazzles xoxoxox
Johnny Rotten, U are a genius with pen in hand...
always Love your thoughts...
Love
Zazzles xoxoxox
20th Jul 2015 3:59am
John made me creamy with this hot dominate gem of a write.. erotically delicious with love Crim
20th Jul 2015 11:05am
There is a savegery to this that is unbridled and instinctive ... lucid shards of a desired ravaging
20th Jul 2015 9:58pm
23rd Jul 2015 6:19pm
Rhythmically sensational! Your ink rivals the surging sea. Fantastic writing! Sincerely, blue angel
Anonymous
5th Aug 2015 4:57am
"Priapus, cast in mortal flesh." That impales the image. It's a great piece, dark, moody, reeks of a soul lost, but wonderfully describes a path anyone of us may follow. There are such vivid images cast there in stark monochrome.
