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Star
I shake the dust from my head
as the wind dances on my torn body
My voice screams only to be
heard by invisible ears
The passing clouds are hushed
and beautiful
Wonder stirs inside me and I
know I'm not alone
And there's one more star
shining in the night sky ♡
as the wind dances on my torn body
My voice screams only to be
heard by invisible ears
The passing clouds are hushed
and beautiful
Wonder stirs inside me and I
know I'm not alone
And there's one more star
shining in the night sky ♡
Published 16th Jul 2015
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16th Jul 2015 8:58pm
Tommie, this piece carries such a warm, spiritual presence. Thank you for sharing.
16th Jul 2015 11:23pm
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16th Jul 2015 10:20pm
I am extremely fond of your gentle piece.
I love the imagery too. I was torn between...
"as the wind dances on my torn body"
and
"My voice screams only to be
heard by invisible ears"
as my favourite.
Thank you for this!
I love the imagery too. I was torn between...
"as the wind dances on my torn body"
and
"My voice screams only to be
heard by invisible ears"
as my favourite.
Thank you for this!
16th Jul 2015 11:26pm
17th Jul 2015 8:23am
17th Jul 2015 11:57am
