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I went to bed thinking about her -
and I woke up still thinking
about her...
and we met for lunch and
I told her -
and she said oh, it's all about you,
isn't it...
Published 11th Jul 2015
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11th Jul 2015 5:52pm
Ya know....so much sucks in the world right now but you continue to make people smile with your clever short poems. On behalf of all of us I say THANK YOU sir!
11th Jul 2015 6:02pm
well I think that must be
the most heartwarming
comment I've had..!
thank you..:)
the most heartwarming
comment I've had..!
thank you..:)
12th Jul 2015 1:04pm
I totally agree with edead - I find your short poems positively good therapy - they make me laugh, they make me smile, most importantly they make me think.
this one makes me think of the fickleness of women turning a positive into a negative - sometimes, you just can't win (lol)
:-)
this one makes me think of the fickleness of women turning a positive into a negative - sometimes, you just can't win (lol)
:-)
12th Jul 2015 11:45pm
thanks, David, although to be fair,
reading back a few of my poems,
she may have a point..:)
reading back a few of my poems,
she may have a point..:)
