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Is she pretty? Prettier than me?

Time is a reminder of all that could be  
Looking at this reflection, it's more than I can see
My thoughts drift away  
I wonder is she pretty...prettier than me?  
 
I gave her life, but gave her away  
It's just what had to be  
I heard the nurses say  
Is she pretty? Prettier than me?  
 
Now that your grown  
A little girl you have of your own  
I hope one day you'll see  
You're pretty, prettier than me...  
 
 
Written by buddydog
Published | Edited 9th Dec 2015
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