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After The Dance (Miss Mini's Groove)
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys
…..all night long, that girl really turns me on....on and on
Staves, mics and stars
emblazoned across her creamy breast
I like the way you move baby
got my head in a terrible mess
…..can't nobody disturb this groove
my heart beats a rhythm
beneath this bed of keys
my primal urges throb
harder and stronger
from my inner thighs
down to my knees...
“...I want you the right way,
I want you
but I want you to want me too
Want you to want me too,
just like I want you”
At the corner of a dimly lit stage
I wrap my arms around her body,
soaking
wet,
feminine
sweat
no regrets.......
...in the heat of the night
“If loving you is wrong,
I don't want to be right”
animal attractions,
a segue to a kiss
her lips osculate “my” hand
my body and mind
can no longer resist
(….I didn't know she could bump like this )
Deep, dark temptations
the “Sweetest Taboo”
in the dark of the night
let the music play
in a place that's
so wet
so tight......
Lust is a rush…..feels so damned right
“....you can't stop me from dancing
you can't stop me from dropping it to my heels
you can't stop me from grinding
you can't stop me from doing anything I feel”
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RqgzRT6cNU4 All Night Long.....
Published 6th Jul 2015
| Edited 7th Jul 2015
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7th Jul 2015 7:02am
great piece! I love the song(?)on your profile page!!!1 Friggin AWESOME...
7th Jul 2015 2:05pm
7th Jul 2015 12:58pm
Mercy, Mr_Mahogany_Wood, luv ~ :-*
You have emblazoned the night with volcanic heat evoking visions of licking flames amidst lava flows... ;-*
Such primal ecstasy you describe in the rhythm, in the flow, in the dance, the music, you know.
I rather adore this:
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys
…..all night long, that girl really turns me on....on and on
Staves, mics and stars
emblazoned across her creamy breast
I like the way you move baby
you got my head in a terrible mess
…..can't nobody disturb this groove
my heart beats a rhythm
beneath this bed of keys
hard and stronger
from my thighs
down to my knees...
“...I want you the right way,
I want you
but I want you to want me too
Want you to want me too,
just like I want you”
At the corner of a dimly lit stage
I wrap my arms around her body,
soaking
wet,
feminine
sweat
no regrets.......
...in the heat of the night
“If loving you is wrong,
I don't want to be right”
animal attractions,
a segue to a kiss
her lips osculate “my” hand
my body and mind
can no longer resist
(….I didn't know she could bump like this )
Deep, dark temptations
the “Sweetest Taboo”
in the dark of the night
let the music play
in a place that's
so wet
so tight......
Lust is a rush…..feels so damned right
“....you can't stop me from dancing
you can't stop me from dropping it to my heels
you can't stop me from grinding
you can't stop me from doing anything I feel”
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys....
Exquisitely crafted, superbly sensual, positively primal, luv... ;-*
You have emblazoned the night with volcanic heat evoking visions of licking flames amidst lava flows... ;-*
Such primal ecstasy you describe in the rhythm, in the flow, in the dance, the music, you know.
I rather adore this:
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys
…..all night long, that girl really turns me on....on and on
Staves, mics and stars
emblazoned across her creamy breast
I like the way you move baby
you got my head in a terrible mess
…..can't nobody disturb this groove
my heart beats a rhythm
beneath this bed of keys
hard and stronger
from my thighs
down to my knees...
“...I want you the right way,
I want you
but I want you to want me too
Want you to want me too,
just like I want you”
At the corner of a dimly lit stage
I wrap my arms around her body,
soaking
wet,
feminine
sweat
no regrets.......
...in the heat of the night
“If loving you is wrong,
I don't want to be right”
animal attractions,
a segue to a kiss
her lips osculate “my” hand
my body and mind
can no longer resist
(….I didn't know she could bump like this )
Deep, dark temptations
the “Sweetest Taboo”
in the dark of the night
let the music play
in a place that's
so wet
so tight......
Lust is a rush…..feels so damned right
“....you can't stop me from dancing
you can't stop me from dropping it to my heels
you can't stop me from grinding
you can't stop me from doing anything I feel”
Commanding her subjects
like a warrior queen
backing up to these
dreaming eyes of mine
fingers flowing to the rhythm
upon white ivory keys....
Exquisitely crafted, superbly sensual, positively primal, luv... ;-*
"....you have emblazoned the night with volcanic heat evoking visions of licking flames amidst lava flows... ;-*
Such primal ecstasy you describe in the rhythm, in the flow, in the dance, the music, you know. "
....an autobiographical sketch of a moment in the life of a performer. To say the least, my 4th of July was a hot night. Sparkling libations, a sensual groove all night (images of Sade's "No Ordinary Love") and visions of a beautiful body that I thought I knew yet discovered that I didn't know. (there is something extremely erotic about holding a sexy, scantily clad woman whose skin is drenching wet with sweat and heat against your body that makes you wanna'.....mmmmm) Yes, all night long , that girl really turned me on....on and on.
Thank you for the affirmation my dear ;-)
Such primal ecstasy you describe in the rhythm, in the flow, in the dance, the music, you know. "
....an autobiographical sketch of a moment in the life of a performer. To say the least, my 4th of July was a hot night. Sparkling libations, a sensual groove all night (images of Sade's "No Ordinary Love") and visions of a beautiful body that I thought I knew yet discovered that I didn't know. (there is something extremely erotic about holding a sexy, scantily clad woman whose skin is drenching wet with sweat and heat against your body that makes you wanna'.....mmmmm) Yes, all night long , that girl really turned me on....on and on.
Thank you for the affirmation my dear ;-)
7th Jul 2015 3:42pm
Welcome, indeed, you are, luv. And, thank You for sharing and sharing again and more... ;-*
Mmm-hmmm...
Drenched.
Mmm-hmmm...
Drenched.
9th Jul 2015 6:07am
Only the true love I share with my partner has held me like your piece. I fucking love this.
6th Aug 2015 6:31am
There's the R & B paced, erotic-narratives and there's ballads. And with you there's some new form, somewhere between. The perspective shifts, keeping up with the changing verses, all of which could be quoted... fiery strong MrM!
