pink petals fade

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Cherish them babe.. aaall you here.
*know how much your strength has helped me cope. tru-tru, need you to believe it.

I'm glad I got to share my song wif you, my midnite
balm. (no 'ifs' there)
loves you
~T

Holy shit this is gorgeous... Sensual and just eloquent.

Loved it

Sweet lady, you give rockin comment jobs y'knw?!

Appreciate helz out of your visit, tyty So much ;)
take care poetess!
~d

Love it!!!!

aaand if it isn't my fav gdgurl!! luckee me ;)

Ever glad to see you here a'sharin wif me, tyty!
sweet nites on you m'dear,
~d

aww Sweet Taryn, I get you, you get me.. & we are
a never-ending tickle pile! *sssly ha's

Just luv the be'no'jezus's outta you m'sis!
(a great thing to be sure) teehees

ty fer sharin my somber and makin me grin unto
fits dearest.. huggs fer it!
lotsO luvz
~d

All I can do is sigh my dark darling, life is a beast but so are we at times.I love the embedded sensuality here. Soft hugs my sweet, you like wines? Good we are to have few glasses then. ;).

Oh yay.. m'sultry Whelms is out fer play!
luckee me, *kisskiss

wine at the ready, always stock cali merlot &
any Syrah avail.. sucker fer reds.
*bubbles up, sweets!

life beast is a surety, *eye to eye there..
hugs n'wine every visit m'luv,
~d

The narration itself is a stitch between moments.

No "if"/ ..only "when" /..in 'goodbye.'

Solid last line.

I am ever humbled to have you here, sweet lady!
the 'Cure' song just sticks in my heart on this.
great eve to you!
mwahs
~d

Ahhh, darksighs, luv ~ :-*

Here is my savant artiste with her gorgeousness in full array, though distraught. You are gloriously beautiful in your heartache, you know, luv. :-*

I am glad there is one who aids and succors you, who is a balm for thee. Roses, though, they are a wondrous flower, for though they wilt and petals fall, come spring and summer, once again they bloom, ever-renewed from the source if tended well... ;-*

Tend thee well, luv. :-*

Darlin LadyS..just love seeing your sweet self in my somber parlor..
you get warm thanks and agreements on those roses.
my house is overrun w/my hoarding of dried ones.lol
(hv not really seen my chandelier in yrrs).. hung
everywhere.

tending well as can do at moment, ty for the heartwarm dearest!
~d

a'sparkling cascade of finely hewn wordism....
       each
inter
  jection  tween stanzas, a gemlike
          punc
          tua
          tion

Aaww, I am totally huggin' your comment Sirz o D!..
always appreciate your presence m'dear.
sweet night & grins your way ;)
~d

Great poem here, but please note that any media you post with it, has to be your own creation--spoken word, video/audio, performing the actual poem you wrote.  I love the Cure as well, but I had to take the video down, as it doesn't fit our posting criteria and would lean toward the "copyright issues" gray-area....

Thanks!

Oh wow, ty my dear lady, I've seen it before frm poets.. reviewed most &  agree, gray-area.. will look further into & take down in meantime.. no harm done.

Gracious ty's ;)
~d

Another wonderful write darksighs.

Wonderful to see you here m'dear! thx ever much fer
poppin' by.
sweet dayz be yours, poet!
~d

eh jaysus darlin, marcescence has to count for something, don't it [?]
some of them just strum maudlin love songs on the bones, like our ribs are macabre harps...
... pity us, the fools, who dance

O' if only it did m'darlin.. superglue on petals
here and grasping..claws uncertain, even.
I just love the way your sharpened mind intakes
to process!
aye, head~shakes to the somber dance, say we..
mwahs n mush cuz missed you ;)
~d