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Almost The Other Woman
An undeveloped love once existed
But it died on my lips long ago
Leaving behind a mere lust
More persistent than any beau
His cologne tickles my nose
With pure pheromones in the air
His hand creeps up my thighs
Daring to brush against me there
Surrounded by all who could betray
Our brief exchange of longing
His love in just another room beyond ours
But I serve as the beacon of his loving
I'm the sin planted in his mind
As he imagines me on my knees
Greedily drinking him in
Like stolen wine from the spoiled and wealthy
As I beckon and tease, I pose a question...
Should I cave in or stand strong
If what she doesn't know won't burn
Then is playing with fire so wrong?
Entered in the Forbidden Lust comp...
But it died on my lips long ago
Leaving behind a mere lust
More persistent than any beau
His cologne tickles my nose
With pure pheromones in the air
His hand creeps up my thighs
Daring to brush against me there
Surrounded by all who could betray
Our brief exchange of longing
His love in just another room beyond ours
But I serve as the beacon of his loving
I'm the sin planted in his mind
As he imagines me on my knees
Greedily drinking him in
Like stolen wine from the spoiled and wealthy
As I beckon and tease, I pose a question...
Should I cave in or stand strong
If what she doesn't know won't burn
Then is playing with fire so wrong?
Entered in the Forbidden Lust comp...
Published 3rd Jul 2015
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Quite the mind tingling teaser. You won't get any advice from me because I'd probably get in trouble for giving it and you might end up in another form of trouble for taking it. Just remember that whatever choice you make, be sure he has the same intensions you have in your heart. Guys are controlled by desires not of the heart... On the other hand, if you wrote this for the comp with no real life inspiration, best of luck! JJ
The love chapter with him is long closed... It's just a little tension between us in other ways. I'm trying to stay out of trouble though. :P
Thank ya!
Thank ya!
4th Jul 2015 00:26am
Ok, I was just adding a short line at the end of that comment and noticed you already responded, lol. You are too quick! Lol jj
4th Jul 2015 00:31am
Im usually inspired by events from my own life... Very few pieces I write are about much else. I need to branch out a bit:)
4th Jul 2015 3:46am
Well you branched out far enough to beat my butt in the comp, lol! Congrats on the win!!!
jj (bowing humbly to the victor)
jj (bowing humbly to the victor)
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4th Jul 2015 00:54am
Always something intriguing about doing something you're not supposed to!
Thanks as always Gabe:)
Thanks as always Gabe:)
Anonymous
4th Jul 2015 1:08am
ah so this is the winning entry, congratz Kitty, well deserving.
Its never easy being the other woman..choices sometimes come with a price.
Its never easy being the other woman..choices sometimes come with a price.
4th Jul 2015 1:27am
I always try to be aware of consequences but sometimes I think with something else other than my brain! Lol!
Thanks pretty lady:)
Thanks pretty lady:)
6th Jul 2015 11:06pm
You pulled me in closer with every word, I think I know this woman as if you had borrowed this from the chronicles of my life really enjoyed reading this I even wanted more great write ✌️
6th Jul 2015 11:27pm
