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Ardent
Pin me against the wall
hearing my protestations
getting smothered
by ardent actions
pushing your tongue
home sweet tasting home
flicking next to mine
as your hands
Oh God..fingers
exploring
taking
for the first time
capturing
my heart
my love
does flow
for you anew
Published 29th Jun 2015
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I find this poem to be erotic in a subtle way that effects the reader in all the right places..... ♡ :)
P.S. Love the pic too!
P.S. Love the pic too!
30th Jun 2015 5:24am
Yes wanted a picture that showed his eagerness his ardent displays of the moment of wanting her now xD
4th Jul 2015 10:58pm
Great passionate poetry. Love the pic also, there's something about a woman in a raincoat ... She often wore one in the morning, and to the church cemetery.
5th Jul 2015 5:31am
