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Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 9:17pm
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26th Jun 2015 9:56pm
Thank you Sansaint! I am glad that you found this piece uplifting...that makes me happy.. Thank you for the encouragement.
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 9:38pm
i love a good haiku. this one is gentle and loving and hopeful. well done.
26th Jun 2015 9:54pm
Thank you Larkspur! I love Haiku as well...to me it exemplifies the art of using an economy of words to convey deep meaning.
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 11:01pm
Exactly. I like tanka as well. Compact styles/forms force you to choose words very carefully. A very fun challenge. You can't just go willy nilly on the page.
26th Jun 2015 11:04pm
I'll have to explore tanka...thanks for the mention. I am even known to write in Shakespearean sonnet style when I get thew urge and that's a challenge as well.
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27th Jun 2015 9:48am
i agree with everything written above, gorgeous, concise, effective, moving... have i said absolutely fucking gorgeous yet?
loveeeeed this!
loveeeeed this!
29th Jun 2015 5:55pm
Thank you so much Katja! I love writing in haiku form. That one can express deep and intimate ideas, straight from the soul, in a mere 17 syllables is a beautiful thing.
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2015 2:07am
You've done a good job GW creating a serene atmosphere with this wonderful haiku.
27th Jul 2015 4:56am
