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I'd Hear Him
I'd hear him
speak of people he'd met
work he'd carried out
jovially telling me of his day
till the tone of his voice changed
along with his breathing
the rise and fall of his chest
my hands on his thighs
keeping him seated whilst
awaiting his arrival
those pent up pleasure shouts
Yeah
I'd hear him
loud and clear.
speak of people he'd met
work he'd carried out
jovially telling me of his day
till the tone of his voice changed
along with his breathing
the rise and fall of his chest
my hands on his thighs
keeping him seated whilst
awaiting his arrival
those pent up pleasure shouts
Yeah
I'd hear him
loud and clear.
Published 24th Jun 2015
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24th Jun 2015 2:30pm
Hello Lookawaynow
I have had a lovely time reading selective chapters of your DU book. And I am so glad I stumbled across them.
Soft, subtle and unintimidating, yet blatently human. It has been an absolute joy feasting your words.
In terms of this piece I loved
"the rise and fall of his chest
my hands on his thighs
keeping him seated whilst
awaiting his arrival "
Thank You so much for the read
Al
I have had a lovely time reading selective chapters of your DU book. And I am so glad I stumbled across them.
Soft, subtle and unintimidating, yet blatently human. It has been an absolute joy feasting your words.
In terms of this piece I loved
"the rise and fall of his chest
my hands on his thighs
keeping him seated whilst
awaiting his arrival "
Thank You so much for the read
Al
24th Jun 2015 3:12pm
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