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...and she danced on my finger tips
I had dreamed of her
and her shaven flesh,
quivering
beneath my tongue
fluttering, parting, dripping
from my lips
the glistening drops,
dripping
from the carnal of
pink waterfalls,
dissolving in lust
the rise and fall
of ebb and flow.
She danced, oblivious
to stares, the music, the mood
feral upon the stage,
eyes transfixed upon us
somewhere in the steamy heat
rising between my papi and I
as we drank shot after shot, watching
her moves, in a language
of its own.
Crawling curves, fell
whirling in waves
and we danced around my man
skin to skin
chest to back
arch to breast
taut and proud
obsession to possession
entwining limbs
erect, furled and pressed
teasing and kissing
wanting him, needing her
to fill the hunger and pleasure
in every crevice and void.
Caressing silk and satin
to caramel and ebony
the gateway to forbidden games
in the monotony
peering the curtains, stoking the fire
throbbing and stroking the minds
molesting and raping
a vortex
to triangle of storms
drowning with shadows.
The inferno
the maddening desire
to taaste the lusciuous fruit
right from the vine
and offer the gift of gods
from my tongue
to him, to her
becoming one.
In the witching hour
in the fold of our dreams
the taste lingers from our
finger tips.
**Submitted for "...3...(erotic women's comp)" Hosted by DevlinDLC**
and her shaven flesh,
quivering
beneath my tongue
fluttering, parting, dripping
from my lips
the glistening drops,
dripping
from the carnal of
pink waterfalls,
dissolving in lust
the rise and fall
of ebb and flow.
She danced, oblivious
to stares, the music, the mood
feral upon the stage,
eyes transfixed upon us
somewhere in the steamy heat
rising between my papi and I
as we drank shot after shot, watching
her moves, in a language
of its own.
Crawling curves, fell
whirling in waves
and we danced around my man
skin to skin
chest to back
arch to breast
taut and proud
obsession to possession
entwining limbs
erect, furled and pressed
teasing and kissing
wanting him, needing her
to fill the hunger and pleasure
in every crevice and void.
Caressing silk and satin
to caramel and ebony
the gateway to forbidden games
in the monotony
peering the curtains, stoking the fire
throbbing and stroking the minds
molesting and raping
a vortex
to triangle of storms
drowning with shadows.
The inferno
the maddening desire
to taaste the lusciuous fruit
right from the vine
and offer the gift of gods
from my tongue
to him, to her
becoming one.
In the witching hour
in the fold of our dreams
the taste lingers from our
finger tips.
**Submitted for "...3...(erotic women's comp)" Hosted by DevlinDLC**
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Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
23rd Jun 2015 3:18pm
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23rd Jun 2015 3:37pm
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23rd Jun 2015 3:58pm
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23rd Jun 2015 6:24pm
LOL....they way you've been writting, I didn't know you stopped....carry on ; )
Thank you so much Reks!
Thank you so much Reks!
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2015 5:13pm
Ooooo Sexy Lena......you did it!! This is excellent......very sexy and alluring......luv this......RL for me.....enjoyed a bit too much actually.....mmmmm.....second shower I think.....LOL!!! Xo :)
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23rd Jun 2015 6:33pm
Yes my darling! I love that you enjoyyyyyyyyeedddd it......it's what I was going for and I have to admit, a little birdie pushed me ; )
Thank you so much as always my lady....xo
Thank you so much as always my lady....xo
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
23rd Jun 2015 5:17pm
Ahhh, Lena-underneath, luv ~ :-*
This is sheer C4! I read this entry when you posted it and went up in flames; I've molten honey to deal with...
All this heat today, you've utterly melted me. ;-*
This is sheer C4! I read this entry when you posted it and went up in flames; I've molten honey to deal with...
All this heat today, you've utterly melted me. ;-*
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re: Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
23rd Jun 2015 6:38pm
yum honey....
Ms. Savaja, you are starting to spoil me.
Thank you for the double honor you've given me today ; )
Ms. Savaja, you are starting to spoil me.
Thank you for the double honor you've given me today ; )
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
23rd Jun 2015 7:29pm
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24th Jun 2015 1:17pm
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
28th Jun 2015 7:18pm
"... para llenar el hambre y el placer en cada grieta y sin efecto ..."
Esto, seņora encantadora, es el ejemplo perfecto de la danza de hambre con el deseo.
Excelente. En cada puto camino, excelente!
xo
C.
Esto, seņora encantadora, es el ejemplo perfecto de la danza de hambre con el deseo.
Excelente. En cada puto camino, excelente!
xo
C.
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re: Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
29th Jun 2015 7:04pm
Me gusta como usas las palabras "hambre con el deseo"......que bonito el sonido ; )
It's always a pleasure to get a visit from you and thank you for the add ; )
It's always a pleasure to get a visit from you and thank you for the add ; )
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
30th Jun 2015 2:57am
seductively artistic. it's a magnificently choreographed & sensual dance...
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re: Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
30th Jun 2015 4:50pm
You are definitely a man with good taste and so I'm honored.
Thank you John ; )
Thank you John ; )
Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2015 8:38pm
well..well..well...lol
you like living dangerously doncha :p
I love the title girl, smoldering hot!
you like living dangerously doncha :p
I love the title girl, smoldering hot!
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re: Re: ...and she danced on my finger tips
5th Jul 2015 11:31pm
Lol........kinda.
Dancing just seemed appropriate. ....xoxoxo
Thank you for stopping by and welcome back girl....what a breath of fresh air.
Dancing just seemed appropriate. ....xoxoxo
Thank you for stopping by and welcome back girl....what a breath of fresh air.
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
24th Jul 2015 3:27pm
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27th Jul 2015 2:12pm
Thank you MagicVisionz!
It's an honor to have you grace my page and leave a comment ; )
It's an honor to have you grace my page and leave a comment ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
Anonymous
29th Jul 2015 1:03am
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Re: Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
29th Jul 2015 1:19pm
It's an incredible honor to have you grace my page Gabriel, thank you!
Here's a secret, i like those lines too ; )
Here's a secret, i like those lines too ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
29th Jul 2015 5:36pm
Lena you have cast a spell over me with your sensually, molten hot erotica I love this.. with love Crim
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29th Jul 2015 6:00pm
Crimsin, you have honored me with your grace and I'm incredibly humbled.
I appreciate your visit and the RL add. You have a beautiful soul my dear ; )
I appreciate your visit and the RL add. You have a beautiful soul my dear ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
29th Jul 2015 7:16pm
Mmmmm soooo yummy this was! The visuals n language had me wanting to re-experience this action lol... Truly hotness in ink my dear! :)
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30th Jul 2015 2:17pm
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
31st Jul 2015 3:32pm
Oh, doll, yes please!! Feral upon the stage, on my tongue to him to her, moments of primal purrrfucktion. 💋 the way this piece escalated in energy, orgasmic. Thank you!
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That sounds delicious....and you're welcome ; )
It's an honor to have you grace my page mamacita........I'm honored my piece was added to your RL ....xoxo
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Re: Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
3rd Aug 2015 1:13pm
Oh wow, thank you Taryn!
If I had you dripping too, then I'm very proud of what I've done....lol
I appreciate the honor of your visit ; )
If I had you dripping too, then I'm very proud of what I've done....lol
I appreciate the honor of your visit ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
22nd Aug 2015 5:52pm
lena your poem is mesmerizing so much so I've read her twice. you paint such a vivid picture this dance is sealed in my mind. enjoyed.
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23rd Aug 2015 9:09pm
Shauna, you made me smile big today ; )
Thank you so much for the great compliment, it's exactly what I'm looking from readers.
Can't wait to read your ink.
Thank you so much for the great compliment, it's exactly what I'm looking from readers.
Can't wait to read your ink.
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
19th Oct 2015 5:42pm
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24th Oct 2015 1:47am
Enjoyment is exactly what I love to hear ; )
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I'm doing a happy dance because this made your RL ; )
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I'm doing a happy dance because this made your RL ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
24th Oct 2015 6:27pm
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25th Oct 2015 9:31pm
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
19th Nov 2015 1:37am
Lena, you have captured pure, fluid, tactile ecstasy in this piece. Brava!
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19th Nov 2015 1:54pm
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
28th Dec 2015 4:06am
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4th Jan 2016 12:58pm
Lol ......something like that.....
thank you for the visit and comment Thinlane ; )
thank you for the visit and comment Thinlane ; )
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
Anonymous
4th Aug 2017 5:57pm
you mustve heard me calling you lol,
you and your honey rivulets, my gosh!
i can truly say, youre by far my
favourite erotic flavor
sh**! ;)
you and your honey rivulets, my gosh!
i can truly say, youre by far my
favourite erotic flavor
sh**! ;)
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Re: Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
4th Aug 2017 6:09pm
Thank you beautiful and it's an honor I hope to continue. As for you, there are no words to describe how your writing moves me and it's as if you see thru me. I want to print all of your work and make a book...xoxo!
Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
11th Nov 2017 5:45pm
I feel as she .does, and I could .serve you both, .(that is how it makes me feel), keep up the delicacy from your sexy soul baby....
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Re: Re. ...and she danced on my finger tips
13th Nov 2017 2:29pm
Wow thank you mamacita and welcome to DU!
I appreciate you holding her on your list ; )
I appreciate you holding her on your list ; )
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12th May 2023 4:10am