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The Pond
A metronome rock
keeping time with the music:
dropping through water.
Dust cloud sediment
spreading across the bottom:
A Lotus rises.
~
keeping time with the music:
dropping through water.
Dust cloud sediment
spreading across the bottom:
A Lotus rises.
~
Published 21st Jun 2015
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21st Jun 2015 4:47am
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21st Jun 2015 8:21am
tender. something as simple as a rock falling into water creates such beauty...
Anonymous
21st Jun 2015 11:08am
such a brilliant & beautiful use of brevity
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21st Jun 2015 7:23pm
Like a plop in the water there at the end. The pond, the metronome; such significance in all the elements. I simply love this...!
24th Jun 2015 00:56am
Double haiku aside, you said a mouthful in very few words. Almost felt witness to the cycle of life in reading this. Nicely done.
Michael
Michael
