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When Thorn and Rose Entangle
Moss green in-cling n' creeping
vines twist, sweet on deceit.
Licked dark, like bloodied-red
~so...hearing the silence bleed...~
Stems grown in veined madness
wrap firm, a beating heart-sign.
Greens 'n'dried-sanguine sadness
~This image frozen in my mind~
Curled thorns, run sharp through
spreading petals 'midst jade stain.
Sting in Ardour, mornings after,
~still working through the pain~
Petals weep contingent pinks
to blend a wishing-well of peace.
Thorns, massive, on petal's seep-
~lust-pain, It even startles ..me~
Published 15th Jun 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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15th Jun 2015 10:01pm
16th Jun 2015 1:12am
Warm hugs doll!
You make my day, fer every read..
alwys luv seein you here ;)
be wellz
~d
You make my day, fer every read..
alwys luv seein you here ;)
be wellz
~d
15th Jun 2015 10:30pm
16th Jun 2015 1:14am
Sweetest thanx fer your thoughts..
*miffy-day, I've been told..lmsao
awesome comment misterz
take care
~d
*miffy-day, I've been told..lmsao
awesome comment misterz
take care
~d
16th Jun 2015 1:07am
aww babe..these were posta be *lust pain tears..I did a sad miff anyhoo(re-read)..u knw me too well ;)
(& used the 4 lines n'eva-lil-thang) teehee
hottest-ever kisses
~T
(& used the 4 lines n'eva-lil-thang) teehee
hottest-ever kisses
~T
16th Jun 2015 6:35am
Darksighs, luv ~ :-*
You have such luscious, voluptuous language tis like being enveloped in sybaritic bliss.
I feel as though immersing myself in your poetry is a full-on experience engaging all my senses. I can feel myself enwrapped round about enclosed in your bittersweet petals and thorns, scarlet slowly seeping, intimately weeping musky honey, crystalline tears dripping, shocked desires tasting...
See what you've done? ;-*
Mmm...
You have such luscious, voluptuous language tis like being enveloped in sybaritic bliss.
I feel as though immersing myself in your poetry is a full-on experience engaging all my senses. I can feel myself enwrapped round about enclosed in your bittersweet petals and thorns, scarlet slowly seeping, intimately weeping musky honey, crystalline tears dripping, shocked desires tasting...
See what you've done? ;-*
Mmm...
16th Jun 2015 7:17am
Giggles here m'dear..
so glad I cud kick-start your fancy this eve!
..I am always *honored to have you here ;)
(*big-time-smiles) <<~~see what *you've dun? batt.batt.
ty much sweetest!
be wicked-wellz (I insist) ;)
~d
so glad I cud kick-start your fancy this eve!
..I am always *honored to have you here ;)
(*big-time-smiles) <<~~see what *you've dun? batt.batt.
ty much sweetest!
be wicked-wellz (I insist) ;)
~d
16th Jun 2015 8:04am
Those fucking thorns... alright you have clawed your way underneath my skins with one, now I must sit here picking these words one by one.. the heart clenches somewhere in there.. plenty of love & hugs
16th Jun 2015 8:15am
lmsao*..Im sure you look awful *kitten-cute*
when doin' so too, m'sweet puurrfect..
you must knows I adore your visits ever-much!
(aaand x-luv fer ur list, ty)
mwahs
~d
when doin' so too, m'sweet puurrfect..
you must knows I adore your visits ever-much!
(aaand x-luv fer ur list, ty)
mwahs
~d
Anonymous
16th Jun 2015 10:46am
beds of roses, thorns [&] all, darling sighs. truth be told, would we savour those satin petals without the sting...
... adore this poignant inking xo
... adore this poignant inking xo
1st Jul 2015 11:27am
