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On the bed - - -

 
On the bed,
She lay,
Spread.

Welcoming him,
Into her.

Maybe this version - - -

On the bed,
She lay,
Spread.

Welcoming him.

What do you'll think?
Written by J_J_Jay_Jr
Published | Edited 24th Aug 2015
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