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In a Broken Dream

 

When the days before my eyes
went from sighs
touching thighs

When the nights found me alone
I'd call out name
echoing back
all the same
still your name

I said
push your love too far
let's be who we are
when we dream
in a dream

*David Gilmour, Rod Stewart...In a Broken Dream 1992 with John Paul Jones

My poor attempt to change the lyrics xD


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