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Pax Mentis
This is entered in McJay's "Prestige" competition
Prestige a disposable commodity
Status not a factor for survival
With success measured in avaricious terms
Something to be said for just getting by
Maintaining friendships and whatever love
All the rest, all that glitters
Just scatters and dissolves
Security blown away with the blink of an eye
Just could use some peace of mind
Currently lost, but hopefully found.
Prestige a disposable commodity
Status not a factor for survival
With success measured in avaricious terms
Something to be said for just getting by
Maintaining friendships and whatever love
All the rest, all that glitters
Just scatters and dissolves
Security blown away with the blink of an eye
Just could use some peace of mind
Currently lost, but hopefully found.
Published 4th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 4:39pm
"All the rest, all that glitters
Just scatters and dissolves"
too true crowfly.
keeping fingers crossed & wishing you luck xo
Just scatters and dissolves"
too true crowfly.
keeping fingers crossed & wishing you luck xo
5th Jun 2015 00:33am
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5th Jun 2015 00:35am
Thanks Taryn. Yes, I'm still looking for that piece of mind. Around here somewhere...
Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 5:25pm
i have tried to comment on this like five times and keep getting interrupted!
i am in awe of those last give lines. there is much to chew on in there, crow. well done!
i am in awe of those last give lines. there is much to chew on in there, crow. well done!
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 8:17am
Great analogy. . .I just can't seem to find the words for mine. . .I wish you the best of luck on the Comp!. . .xoxo, Devlin.
5th Jun 2015 9:25am
Peace of Mind. Like Boston sings of. That's the real crown. Awesome write, comrade!
6th Jun 2015 2:32pm
An intelligent write, Crow. The Latin title I was trying to decode, but only understood Peace. Mentis relates to "deceit" (which I had to research). But your picture suggests a King, one who is worried or insecure, or has a fearful look. That said, prestige does not always seem to belong to royalty and there is even more uncertainty in that position because are they your friends because of your power or they genuinely like you? Thats what I am taking and I like it because of it. Haha. Good write.
