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Without You
There's no me
Without you.
No sky
Without blue.
No bird
Without song.
No right
Without wrong.
There're no stars
Without night.
No sun
Without light.
No Spring
Without flowers.
No Fall
Without showers.
There's no sail
Without wind.
Forgiveness
Without sin.
No love
Without heart.
No end
Without start.
There's no truth
Without lies.
Clouds
Without skies.
No one
Without two.
There's no me
Without you.
I love you!
Without you.
No sky
Without blue.
No bird
Without song.
No right
Without wrong.
There're no stars
Without night.
No sun
Without light.
No Spring
Without flowers.
No Fall
Without showers.
There's no sail
Without wind.
Forgiveness
Without sin.
No love
Without heart.
No end
Without start.
There's no truth
Without lies.
Clouds
Without skies.
No one
Without two.
There's no me
Without you.
I love you!
Published 4th Jun 2015
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4th Jun 2015 11:05am
At first this seems to be a simple rhyming poem with typical rhymes but the rhymes themselves give many profound thoughts. I thoroughly enjoyed this! Excellent write.
4th Jun 2015 5:08pm
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