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Red Hot Luver
come surrender yourself to me
feel my flaming soul up close
from upon this bed of fire of which we lay
it is I causing that burn deep within your soul
with fiery fingertips of passionate lust
burning across your sexy sweating flesh
intertwined tongues swapping hot saliva
skeleton lips burnt upon your skin from kisses
your hotness scolding my throat swallowing liquid fire
lay here while I corrupt you completely
feel my demon hot sigh consume your desires
no mercy granted as I burn thru your veins
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
feel my flaming soul up close
from upon this bed of fire of which we lay
it is I causing that burn deep within your soul
with fiery fingertips of passionate lust
burning across your sexy sweating flesh
intertwined tongues swapping hot saliva
skeleton lips burnt upon your skin from kisses
your hotness scolding my throat swallowing liquid fire
lay here while I corrupt you completely
feel my demon hot sigh consume your desires
no mercy granted as I burn thru your veins
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
Published 4th Jun 2015
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 2:44am
"lay here while I corrupt you completely
feel my demon hot sigh consume your desires
no mercy granted as I burn thru your veins"
Now THIS is a very dark and delicious write, Miss Flower. You outdid yourself with this one!. . .Enjoyed!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
feel my demon hot sigh consume your desires
no mercy granted as I burn thru your veins"
Now THIS is a very dark and delicious write, Miss Flower. You outdid yourself with this one!. . .Enjoyed!. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
4th Jun 2015 4:05am
Awe Dev......I bow in humbleness to be graced with your words......you're perfect in writing dark erotic......very honored my friend......thank you...xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
4th Jun 2015 2:47am
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4th Jun 2015 4:42am
Sweet S.....Wowzers!! Your words make me smile......hope your heat isn't waisted and you get to share it with a special sexy sweet soul.....thank you....honored by the RL add on....xo :)
Anonymous
4th Jun 2015 3:22am
I am in, you have already corrupted me, very hot!
4th Jun 2015 4:55am
Oooooo SG......me corruptive.....no never....oops.....my halo fell off.....my horns had a growth spirt.....LOL!!! Thank you for the hot comment.....xo :)
4th Jun 2015 4:00am
4th Jun 2015 4:56am
Hey X.....thanks for jumping in the fire with me......glad you enjoyed....xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
4th Jun 2015 5:22am
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4th Jun 2015 5:31am
Oooooo Sexy Lily......my lips are HOT.....yours are STICKY......put them together and we have a sexy hot sticky kiss.....LOL!!!! You make me laugh and smile....thank you xo :)
4th Jun 2015 7:15am
wow flower this could get any man for you and the picture went so well with the poem sexy woman
16th Jun 2015 5:28am
Hi Glen.......thank you for such a compliment......glad you the pic.....now if you have that drink......a donut and a stool at the bar.....you could be my man for the night.....LOL!!! You've made me smile.....xo :)
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
4th Jun 2015 11:36am
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Hey pretty Lady......I'm glad those lines heated you....always an honor to see you bless my page with your smile......thank you....xo :)
5th Jun 2015 2:18pm
My screen was smoking here....lol
I'm just fumbling tryig to turn on the fan at my desk.....steamy ink my lady ; )
I'm just fumbling tryig to turn on the fan at my desk.....steamy ink my lady ; )
16th Jun 2015 5:35am
LOL!!! Always making me smile and laugh my sweet friend......hope your fan still works.....you're a whole lot of sexiness to cool off......thank you my friend.....xo :)
5th Jun 2015 6:22pm
16th Jun 2015 5:38am
Sweet EV......the master of corruption......all I have to say back is......REALLY!!!!! Thank you!!!!! Luv and hugs xo :)
6th Jun 2015 8:53pm
16th Jun 2015 5:45am
Awe JJ......always happy to add a little sizzle to your day......thank you for joining me in the fire......xo :)
30th Jun 2015 7:39am
30th Jun 2015 4:56pm
Awe Me......you have made me blush......thank you for such a high praise......glad you enjoyed this pic of fire.....xo :)
1st Aug 2015 3:17pm
this piece is sooo hot... it can cause a fire for sure! no water needed... let it burn let it burn hehe... great ink!
3rd Aug 2015 9:53pm
Hi Magic.......thank you for feeling the fire......glad you thought it was hot......thank you always make me blush......xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:46am
Last stanza was a goodie!
4th Aug 2015 5:32am
