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Just If
If I see my reflection
in your eyes
I will know
the warmth of your arms
If I hear my name
tasted on your lips
I will understand
the depth of your love
If I feel your arms
around me at night
I will hold on
and bask in your wants
If. just If.
in your eyes
I will know
the warmth of your arms
If I hear my name
tasted on your lips
I will understand
the depth of your love
If I feel your arms
around me at night
I will hold on
and bask in your wants
If. just If.
Published 3rd Jun 2015
| Edited 29th Oct 2023
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 5:54pm
those two simple words, which make a great title by the way I think, because they are so universal, could describe countless situations in our lives..at least I know for certain in my case they could..nice write
3rd Jun 2015 6:26pm
3rd Jun 2015 6:25pm
Beautifully expressed! Such sweet desires should win whatever competition they are entered in just as they should win any heart they have entered in... jj
3rd Jun 2015 6:30pm
Not all hearts, Poetryman. Most would think that incredibly soppy and lame.:) what can I say. I am a hopeless romantic.
3rd Jun 2015 6:51pm
4th Jun 2015 3:14am
Barry Manilow...I listened to him once...listened without hearing. He wrote the song.:)
3rd Jun 2015 6:44pm
Do not be afaid of that which some may call sentimental. Sentimentality is a mature emotion an honourable companion to romance.Lovely poem Idryad
4th Jun 2015 00:12am
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 6:52pm
Never stop being romantic, it is food for all our hearts. This is as lovely as can be! I try to always be a romantic
4th Jun 2015 00:13am
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 8:51pm
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