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Well-designed
When he first takes her from behind, he grips
Her haunches as he presses home; she spreads
Her bottom, then he clasps her and he slips
So deep that she gets anxious, for she dreads
Him coming in her; yet, she wants the slide
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug;
She loves his every surge and wants the tide
Of her devotion to lead to a flood
Of juice to fill her womb up; and when he
Is done with using her, then he instructs
His girl to press right back, so he can see
Her well-impaled and eager to be fucked
Again in her tight cunt: she's well-designed
For him to grip, when taken from behind.
Her haunches as he presses home; she spreads
Her bottom, then he clasps her and he slips
So deep that she gets anxious, for she dreads
Him coming in her; yet, she wants the slide
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug;
She loves his every surge and wants the tide
Of her devotion to lead to a flood
Of juice to fill her womb up; and when he
Is done with using her, then he instructs
His girl to press right back, so he can see
Her well-impaled and eager to be fucked
Again in her tight cunt: she's well-designed
For him to grip, when taken from behind.
Published 2nd Jun 2015
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2nd Jun 2015 7:58am
"..yet, she wants the slide
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug.."
~smmoth image in-glide man, lovin' your pen
here.
".. then he instructs
His girl to press right back, so he can see
Her well-impaled and eager to be fucked.."
~hot pant, very *hawt lines! eye contact and
watching while en-tryst magnifies the feel
of *everything.
enjoyed,be well!
~d
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug.."
~smmoth image in-glide man, lovin' your pen
here.
".. then he instructs
His girl to press right back, so he can see
Her well-impaled and eager to be fucked.."
~hot pant, very *hawt lines! eye contact and
watching while en-tryst magnifies the feel
of *everything.
enjoyed,be well!
~d
2nd Jun 2015 9:07am
Great visual...
The painted mental picture is great
"When he first takes her from behind, he grips
Her haunches as he presses home; she spreads
Her bottom, then he clasps her and he slips
So deep that she gets anxious, for she dreads
Him coming in her; yet, she wants the slide
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug;"
Personally this is a favorite moment, one I savor and cherish each time as each time is in some way unique to all the others. Excellent wordsmithing!
The painted mental picture is great
"When he first takes her from behind, he grips
Her haunches as he presses home; she spreads
Her bottom, then he clasps her and he slips
So deep that she gets anxious, for she dreads
Him coming in her; yet, she wants the slide
Of rutting man that makes her grip the rug;"
Personally this is a favorite moment, one I savor and cherish each time as each time is in some way unique to all the others. Excellent wordsmithing!
2nd Jun 2015 11:11pm
As the young lady written about in this poem commented: "What a lovely poem to tell me that you enjoy my fat arse".
Thank you for the positive feedback.
Smiles S.O.
Thank you for the positive feedback.
Smiles S.O.
4th Jun 2015 8:59pm
