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all i dare to say
you are scared of me leaving but this is wrong,
you should be worried that i will stay
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i am a caged wolf;
i am a loyal dog.
you punish me for biting.
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the day is a dead sunday on a monday full of sunshine in the green grass with my boots on smoking a cigarette
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my body is your best toy
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and i am cold
you were sure i’d leave you alone after taking all your time and you were scared of being broken after i’d torn everything down and built me a castle with your bones
you knew i’d go on lying and stealing and saying anything to make the time pass to get you to hold me because i play games and no one wins
you always follow the rules and don’t hurt me so you catch me when i twist away
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you should be worried that i will stay
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i am a caged wolf;
i am a loyal dog.
you punish me for biting.
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the day is a dead sunday on a monday full of sunshine in the green grass with my boots on smoking a cigarette
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
my body is your best toy
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and i am cold
you were sure i’d leave you alone after taking all your time and you were scared of being broken after i’d torn everything down and built me a castle with your bones
you knew i’d go on lying and stealing and saying anything to make the time pass to get you to hold me because i play games and no one wins
you always follow the rules and don’t hurt me so you catch me when i twist away
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Published 30th May 2015
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31st May 2015 00:17am
31st May 2015 3:01am
31st May 2015 7:58am
31st May 2015 7:15pm
Dogs - called low because they are loyal
Image beyond beyond: castle with your bones
Original personal write - free
Image beyond beyond: castle with your bones
Original personal write - free
1st Jun 2015 2:44pm
smells bloody hunt of a parasitic wolverine all the way..but above all the sharing, the innocence, the desperation n childisness I sense from all the spaces inbetween n the breaths in here. a play so beyond rules and also stricly within rules... n a maturity of a gamer (winner?) in that last liner.
gud to c u back in ur daring mode ever, anna:)
gud to c u back in ur daring mode ever, anna:)
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16th Jun 2015 9:54am
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14th Aug 2015 1:44pm
'you were scared of being broken after i’d torn everything down and built me a castle with your bones' You must be fun to date. I love the edge of the seat feeling that seems to come naturally to your writing. Lots of trouble. A great write.
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8th May 2019 8:27am
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