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elemental fungibilis

  

that its last spark,the longest lasting one
was a combustible blue-tinged comet
bore an eyeful deep-yellow core
of distant sky's darkened turmeric-moon  
glowering arrhythmic
in violent tendrils: saffron pistil streaks
than its foregone steady plains  
in lightened bluntwhites

went off in a smoky veil
the accepting molten candle
drowned in its own atmospherics
uncomplaining forces, even
those sudden digging-in
lucidly rigging oars of timewheel puzzle
in alarming amplitudes

amidst on-off fibrous flashlights
keying in thickly thunder-black nights
a rooftop pvc pipeline
as if singled out by listening Gods
was heard in Oracle's immediacy:
drained out  
drumming rains in series of fire crackles
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the just extinguished fluidic waves
danced away its last-leg grays
to nowhere

Written by summultima (uma)
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