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Conversation with my Conscience
Tell me your thoughts
on the world today…
Why each minute in civilization
forces you further astray?
“Speak of glass houses-
that no longer exist?
How men cast stones-
led by iron fist?”
It can’t be so bad, friend-
(just push and shove)
What about this freedom-
we brag so freely of?
“A money populated society-
deems no one free…
Corruption runs it’s course,
not sensitivity…”
Retention of progress-
belated concert?
Higher communication-
exactly what can this hurt?
“Blatant bitterness,
(you must think of me)
Retention brings hatred,
drown about by degree…
Where’s the retention-
of song and innocence?
The love of simplicity-
not the building of fence…”
Suppress the foundation-
terror in defiance,
Won’t there always remain-
cacophony in silence?
“Be that as it may
I shall not overstay”
“This world becomes less-
than my ideal design,
I believe it’s just safer-
to reside in my mind…”
Published 28th May 2015
| Edited 20th Jul 2015
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29th May 2015 00:09am
29th May 2015 1:47am
And You, my dear, have the most adorable phrasing *ever!
Thanks fer comin' ta visit-
'preciate it greatly!
~d
Thanks fer comin' ta visit-
'preciate it greatly!
~d
29th May 2015 1:21am
Interesting words of wisdom shared with your silent side. Very nicely expressed! JJ
29th May 2015 2:21am
yes, we dispute regularly..lol!
Thanks for peeking into one of my odes to
world-suck hun! Makes one want to hermit-ize..
even me.
Always dig seeing you here!
~d
Thanks for peeking into one of my odes to
world-suck hun! Makes one want to hermit-ize..
even me.
Always dig seeing you here!
~d
29th May 2015 2:32am
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- Edited 29th May 2015 9:27am
29th May 2015 9:25am
off the beaten path
one learns to build
a fortress with stones
cast aside by those
impaled on
their picket fences,
chained to the daily grind
like sheeple on a spit...
... linger with a glass
of wine or two
and feast on your freedom
loved this!
one learns to build
a fortress with stones
cast aside by those
impaled on
their picket fences,
chained to the daily grind
like sheeple on a spit...
... linger with a glass
of wine or two
and feast on your freedom
loved this!
29th May 2015 11:43am
An astounding verse to lighten the suck for me,ty Sweet One! *kiss-kiss
You are so *there with this, makes me breathe easy..you's special'uns still fathom the menace. loves fer that!
wine would be nice, in buckets- pls? ;)
thanks much (ur fan) ;)
~d
You are so *there with this, makes me breathe easy..you's special'uns still fathom the menace. loves fer that!
wine would be nice, in buckets- pls? ;)
thanks much (ur fan) ;)
~d
29th May 2015 2:40pm
11th Jun 2015 4:48pm
Can't have my silence w/out it m'thinks!
luvz to you dear, fer reading while I
try to rationalize..wif'myself
big grins fer you...here...and here ;)
ty-ty
~d
luvz to you dear, fer reading while I
try to rationalize..wif'myself
big grins fer you...here...and here ;)
ty-ty
~d
