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Intergrievance Support Council Report ToThose 'In Need"
a'portion of My Platitude(s)
are set
a
side to hel'hel'help
thee needy
needy
needy?
who's needy?
whose needy?
who among ye needs (me) ?
You (goldurn ye!) left
thee meatbags a settin on the
frontporch 8days in the blazin
florida gunshine state (heat!)....
8days....8days....flies'n'maggots in
th'meatballs
(balls of meat)
8days....
who
is gonna touch it?
who is gonna
raze the house
for safety's
sake?
(Damn!)
Let's get on it, fckrs!
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2015dkzkFOTO:BY:dkzkmalographs\"TightTongueTwicksATune"
Published 28th May 2015
| Edited 29th May 2015
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Anonymous
29th May 2015 00:06am
I think this poem needs to be taken to ye lo'c(o)l
cit'y hal'l. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
cit'y hal'l. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
29th May 2015 3:26am
29th May 2015 00:34am
who'd be a fly on the wall
when there's a rotting meatball
going to waste -
some flies just ain't got no taste...
when there's a rotting meatball
going to waste -
some flies just ain't got no taste...
29th May 2015 3:28am
29th May 2015 11:06am
you are such radically versed n the passion~violence altogether in those bits n pieces oozing in..the rotting meatball n the wormy flies in wriggly-buzzy succession..enof of chaos n an impulse to set you write;) (am stil juz starng at hazy radiating pic, almost lost der)
My writing seems to have a disorienting effect. Sorry dear.
Chaos is endemic to everything humans do wit their 'collective consciousness' because of individuated ego creating billions 'realities' in discordance to each other. The only way we can cope is utter denial, & spirit-toxic, distraction, diversion, & disawareness, interrupted by fleeting moments of beauty, & even rarer moments of 'clarity'(which often turn out to be delusion, because we 'believe' we own (possess) them.
I dunno. "I" am thus twisted.
99.9% percent spontaneous flow from some sub-psyche.
I have No Excuse....unpremeditated
Chaos is endemic to everything humans do wit their 'collective consciousness' because of individuated ego creating billions 'realities' in discordance to each other. The only way we can cope is utter denial, & spirit-toxic, distraction, diversion, & disawareness, interrupted by fleeting moments of beauty, & even rarer moments of 'clarity'(which often turn out to be delusion, because we 'believe' we own (possess) them.
I dunno. "I" am thus twisted.
99.9% percent spontaneous flow from some sub-psyche.
I have No Excuse....unpremeditated
