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Captive Wings
As crystal falls-
from salt-fed eyes,
a burn to melt the breeze
Drop to liquid-
heady pool
A duct...
for Bold and Bleed.
A shard of "been"
in white-stain pour-
alloyed with silver fear
Belated are the pardons
that splay like lover's years...
The aches of time, material-
(dust on bone on dust)
Are consecration of a slice-
when fear stems stark with lust...
Iron stays suspending will-
in fits of palish pink,
To rise above a ceiling, torn
chagrined, I stretch my wings...
Behold! below...
A whiff of singe,
A burn to save my soul!
Dare I feel it mark my path?
Dare it make me whole?
To myself, "tread lightly now...
lest finality be born."
Ply with power's heady sight
"be brave, my mighty storm."
These burning bonds, alike we are
I sink before the deed...
To ripen from a pleasure pour-
I cringe. I need. I seethe.
... and Sweet Goddess, do I still need ...
from salt-fed eyes,
a burn to melt the breeze
Drop to liquid-
heady pool
A duct...
for Bold and Bleed.
A shard of "been"
in white-stain pour-
alloyed with silver fear
Belated are the pardons
that splay like lover's years...
The aches of time, material-
(dust on bone on dust)
Are consecration of a slice-
when fear stems stark with lust...
Iron stays suspending will-
in fits of palish pink,
To rise above a ceiling, torn
chagrined, I stretch my wings...
Behold! below...
A whiff of singe,
A burn to save my soul!
Dare I feel it mark my path?
Dare it make me whole?
To myself, "tread lightly now...
lest finality be born."
Ply with power's heady sight
"be brave, my mighty storm."
These burning bonds, alike we are
I sink before the deed...
To ripen from a pleasure pour-
I cringe. I need. I seethe.
... and Sweet Goddess, do I still need ...
Published 24th May 2015
| Edited 10th Oct 2015
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25th May 2015 2:24am
That last line seems a bit of an anti-climax to the previous. If it's intended as such, I would suggest a space to allow the crescendo to rest a second longer.
25th May 2015 11:27am
Thanx always dear...tot agree, I hadn't meant to post it yet, at time (submit or save...same to sleepy eyes.lol) Finished now tho..and not so sleepy. *g's
Loves fer the honesty..much appreciate it!
be well ;)
~d
Loves fer the honesty..much appreciate it!
be well ;)
~d
