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"Tu"
the Sun sets
she sweats
so do I
'twill be a night sky
granted a view of our potion
passion filled heated motion
this is how it begins
soon she'll be full within
mouth, puss, ass and mouth
around the world lovin' no doubt
it's what we do
Mister McNasty and Tiny Tu
adores my filthy mind
along with other things she finds
"amazing" is her word though it applies
to this fine lady of petite size
I grant it all, all I am
mediocrity cannot withstand
visits from the Orient to gamble
and much more, lest I ramble
Tu
this is for you
*May 24, 2015*
Published 24th May 2015
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24th May 2015 5:12pm
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25th May 2015 6:48pm
24th May 2015 6:46pm
Ahhh, VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
You definitely have a way with words bending them to dance merrily along in lecherously loving lyrical lilts.
Hmmm... I might be feeling a bit of whimsy after reading this treat of yours. The two of you are rather adorable, luv, and I've missed seeing you. :-*
You definitely have a way with words bending them to dance merrily along in lecherously loving lyrical lilts.
Hmmm... I might be feeling a bit of whimsy after reading this treat of yours. The two of you are rather adorable, luv, and I've missed seeing you. :-*
25th May 2015 6:54pm
Savaja, first I must say, it is you that's been missed around here.
Your gratifying remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
She is a treat. One I get to experience twice a year.
Your, "adorable" comment coaxed from her a literal, "awwhh." :)
Thank you!
xo
C.
Your gratifying remarks are met with sincere gratitude.
She is a treat. One I get to experience twice a year.
Your, "adorable" comment coaxed from her a literal, "awwhh." :)
Thank you!
xo
C.
Anonymous
24th May 2015 8:25pm
Well this poem only proves where your "absence" has been "present". . .Don't know if you're married, but this sounds awfully like a honeymooners poem. A beautiful piece. It flowed well from beginning to end. . .Enjoyed, but I did not enjoy missing you here on DU;(. . .xoxo, Devlin.
25th May 2015 7:14pm
Devlin, your insightful remarks are always appreciated.
I was once married for many years. I've been single for two years.
Tu is from the coast, Gulf of Thailand. She lives in Pattaya.
Her and I have spent several pleasurable weekends together.
We are nodding our heads at your, "honeymooners" comparison. It is like a honeymoon each time she visits.
Thank you!
xo
C.
I have not enjoyed missing you, either!
I was once married for many years. I've been single for two years.
Tu is from the coast, Gulf of Thailand. She lives in Pattaya.
Her and I have spent several pleasurable weekends together.
We are nodding our heads at your, "honeymooners" comparison. It is like a honeymoon each time she visits.
Thank you!
xo
C.
I have not enjoyed missing you, either!
25th May 2015 00:29am
Damn VP...i thought you were waiting for me...lol...
'tis more than a loving poem...its an honest poem of feelings and desires...
and there's a touch of the gentle you showing through... :)
'tis more than a loving poem...its an honest poem of feelings and desires...
and there's a touch of the gentle you showing through... :)
25th May 2015 11:01pm
Damn, kate! ;)
I've been waiting for you but the wait has been longer than I could wait. :D
Tu said to tell you, "This virile man is impatient."
I cannot disagree. :)
Thank you for the kind words.
xo
C.
I've been waiting for you but the wait has been longer than I could wait. :D
Tu said to tell you, "This virile man is impatient."
I cannot disagree. :)
Thank you for the kind words.
xo
C.
26th May 2015 1:41am
Ooooo EV......really awesome tribute to your Lady friend......sounds like a great visit.....gambling and sex.....can't lose with those odds.....enjoyed this very much.....luv and hugs xo :)
1st Jun 2015 5:47am
Very true, ES. :) Can't lose with those odds.
Appreciate you much, dear friend.
Thank you for the luv and hugs!
Right back at ya!
xo
EV
Appreciate you much, dear friend.
Thank you for the luv and hugs!
Right back at ya!
xo
EV
26th May 2015 2:16pm
I always love your dedication poems. It's as if we get to peek into your provate world. It's hot....lol
1st Jun 2015 5:51am
1st Jun 2015 5:57am
Not bad, but I think it could've been better.
I think you should've made it a little more sexier however it's not bad
I think you should've made it a little more sexier however it's not bad
1st Jun 2015 6:49am
What is the largest room in the world?
Room for improvement.
We all reside therein.
Appreciate you stopping by, Ms RJ.
Room for improvement.
We all reside therein.
Appreciate you stopping by, Ms RJ.
1st Jun 2015 9:46pm
