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Who are you.
Who is he? Who am I?
How could I be so Inlove with a lie?
I mean was I blind? You were never mine. You were my fuckin dream-you turned into a nightmare it seems.
Promises of love-denied.
It was never enough- I was never enough. Enlighten me please- how could you rape me, cage me, control me, show me love that brought me so close to a hell disguised as heaven?
How how you claim to love me- But treat me like a dog? Like steps you could just walk over. You take-take-until there's nothing left of me. Nothing but broken little pieces...
Enlighten me please, on how you could be so cold.
How could I be so Inlove with a lie?
I mean was I blind? You were never mine. You were my fuckin dream-you turned into a nightmare it seems.
Promises of love-denied.
It was never enough- I was never enough. Enlighten me please- how could you rape me, cage me, control me, show me love that brought me so close to a hell disguised as heaven?
How how you claim to love me- But treat me like a dog? Like steps you could just walk over. You take-take-until there's nothing left of me. Nothing but broken little pieces...
Enlighten me please, on how you could be so cold.
Published 24th May 2015
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Anonymous
24th May 2015 6:53am
This speaks to me on a personal level, i know exactly what you mean. I just want you to know you're not the only one who has experienced this. This poem is so deep and raw it's simply intriguing. And strikes at the heart.
Keep up the good work.
Keep up the good work.
24th May 2015 9:07am
Thank you so much. Getting positive feedback on my poems always makes me so happy. I write from the heart.
The things i can't put into words I put into poems..
The things i can't put into words I put into poems..
