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River Flows
can you feel my soul as the river flows
does its sounds reminds you of me
or another soul that has swept your passion
as the stars twinkle upon its ripples
is it me that shines within your soul
watch as it gracefully runs over rocks
with no care of them drowning
wild and free flowing
reflections of trees so green like our eyes
golden sun adding its own shimmer
clouds move across its surface
as if they are floating in it
how beautiful this feeling is
feeling my thoughts of......YOU
does its sounds reminds you of me
or another soul that has swept your passion
as the stars twinkle upon its ripples
is it me that shines within your soul
watch as it gracefully runs over rocks
with no care of them drowning
wild and free flowing
reflections of trees so green like our eyes
golden sun adding its own shimmer
clouds move across its surface
as if they are floating in it
how beautiful this feeling is
feeling my thoughts of......YOU
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Re: River Flows
23rd May 2015 9:18am
does its sounds.... reminds!!! you of me
a bit of edit would be nice flowery
otherwise as good as before
a bit of edit would be nice flowery
otherwise as good as before
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:24am
Hey Again.....well you know how I am about edit.....have to have it my way.....good catch thought.....I did read it over that way a few times.....night be hope yet.....LOL!! Thank you xo :)
Re: River Flows
23rd May 2015 11:20am
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26th May 2015 2:28am
Hi Glen......good to see you......I luv picking out pics.....almost as thrilling as writing......LOL!!! Glad you felt the mood.....xo :)
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:30am
Awe Sweet S......you make me blush......I'm so happy this felt tranquil.....I wrote it with a mixed heart....thank you xo :)
Re: River Flows
Anonymous
23rd May 2015 4:15pm
I could feel the sun on my shoulders as I read this, very serene piece.Lovely
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:34am
SG......your words brought me a touch of peace......thank you sweet friend......xo :)
Re: River Flows
23rd May 2015 5:22pm
Beautifully expressed
"how beautiful this feeling is
feeling my thoughts of......YOU"
"how beautiful this feeling is
feeling my thoughts of......YOU"
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:35am
Hi Cherry......honored you have stopped my way.....humbled by your words......thank you...xo :)
Re: River Flows
23rd May 2015 6:21pm
You've got a gentle current Flower. Always a pleasure! Waterfalls and rivers, you've got it all.
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:38am
Tender souls and beautiful words like yours Crow keep my pen flowing......thank you as always.....xo :)
Re: River Flows
24th May 2015 5:51pm
Beautiful imagery laced with sweet metaphors of nature expressing the flows within your heart... very nice purple girl... jj
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re: Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:40am
Hey JJ......nature inspires me a lot......it's beauty is stunning.....calms my soul to relax and feel it's luv......thank you for beautiful words and thoughts.....xo :)
Re: River Flows
25th May 2015 11:07pm
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26th May 2015 2:42am
Hi EV......so happy to see your corruptiveness upon my page.....I thank you for bringing an evil smile upon me......glad you enjoyed......xo :)
Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:44am
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26th May 2015 2:52am
Hey Stormi.....always an honor to see your smile.....thank you....glad you like this one.....appreciate you....xo :)
Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 7:56am
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28th May 2015 4:00am
Hey John......honored to see you cruising my way......thanks for the swaying comment xo :)
Re: River Flows
26th May 2015 2:50pm
I love this! There's nothing like the sound of the water as it flows and the glistening look and the calmness you feel as your eyes rest on it.....it's exactly the way to be remembered as you look at it.
Gorgeous ; )
Gorgeous ; )
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re: Re: River Flows
28th May 2015 4:19am
Sexy Lena.......always a thrill to see such sexiness upon my page......I could sit there for hours listening to waterfalls...rivers....ocean.....amazing how something with so much power can be so beautiful and calming.....thank you for your sweet words....xo :)
Re: River Flows
27th May 2015 2:41am
Pictures hung
The beautiful imagery
Eye candy
Blessing all of us
Everyday
Not the picture posted
It is the words you say
Making us see love
A world of wonder
And amazement
Treasures of the light
That blossoms
From a Flower
Capturing our senses
With complete delight
The beautiful imagery
Eye candy
Blessing all of us
Everyday
Not the picture posted
It is the words you say
Making us see love
A world of wonder
And amazement
Treasures of the light
That blossoms
From a Flower
Capturing our senses
With complete delight
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re: Re: River Flows
28th May 2015 5:22am
Awe AS.....you've made me blush tonight with your charm of poetic words and encouragement......I always treasure your pleasant smile upon my page......I'm honored.....xo :)
Re. River Flows
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 3:56am
Ahhh . . . When you can have those feelings of someone who may, or may not reciprocate,that is fine as wine.
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4th Aug 2015 5:21am