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River Flows

can you feel my soul as the river flows  
does its sounds reminds you of me  
or another soul that has swept your passion  
as the stars twinkle upon its ripples  
is it me that shines within your soul  
watch as it gracefully runs over rocks  
with no care of them drowning  
wild and free flowing  
reflections of trees so green like our eyes  
golden sun adding its own shimmer  
clouds move across its surface  
as if they are floating in it  
how beautiful this feeling is  
feeling my thoughts of......YOU
Written by flowergirl
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