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Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 1:56am
Nothing like a good romp in the midnight woods :)Did she go out..? I like the double meaning.
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re: Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 2:03am
I always think if there's a double meaning
I'm more likely to get one of them
right..:)
I'm more likely to get one of them
right..:)
re: Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 11:07pm
Re: don't be frightened...
Paul, you, from somewhere all of sudden, title the poem to fix the context and convey tonnes in spaces and dots...
and some words
Isnt it totally reversing tables to the wordy poets like me speaking blah blah blah.. N then holding nothing too;)
amazing small piece (..and i think, dont write her off. she might be a faroff star of another universe, perhaps wud hit back agn . watch de skies better:)
and some words
Isnt it totally reversing tables to the wordy poets like me speaking blah blah blah.. N then holding nothing too;)
amazing small piece (..and i think, dont write her off. she might be a faroff star of another universe, perhaps wud hit back agn . watch de skies better:)
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re: Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 11:10pm
Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 6:01pm
your brightness should help avoid it ever being dark :-)
Nice write :-)
Nice write :-)
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re: Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 11:13pm
you know that Oscar Wilde quote -
"we're all in the gutter,
but some of us are looking
at the stars..." ?
I think the light always looks much
brighter in the dark..:)
"we're all in the gutter,
but some of us are looking
at the stars..." ?
I think the light always looks much
brighter in the dark..:)
Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 8:31pm
Paul, mo chara,
Your inner light always shines forth...lighting even the the furthest caliginous corners of soul and mind.
This one leaves me with heart-sparkles...and sunlite's warmth...:)
Your inner light always shines forth...lighting even the the furthest caliginous corners of soul and mind.
This one leaves me with heart-sparkles...and sunlite's warmth...:)
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re: Re: don't be frightened...
20th May 2015 11:15pm