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bondage by body
No cuffs I need
to sip of seed,
my chains are body parts...
No whip about
nor feathers' pout,
I link with hips and heart...
I've never found
to hold you down,
when you're always pulling close
..close ..close.
Or force your tip
to hotly slip
'tween breasts till you explode.
..almost..
..so close..
My fevered lips
an aching grip,
Throat holds you while you go.
Won't force your hands
into my hair,
I crave rough
just
right
..there.
No blindfold needed
for my feeding,
I want to see it all...
Don't close those eyes,
I'm hypnotized
in body's bondage call.
Published 17th May 2015
| Edited 21st Jul 2015
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17th May 2015 10:00am
17th May 2015 4:07pm
and you, sir? Just rock!
Really wanted the ideal here to be a "no toys needed- when it's good" example.
Thankies fer the stop-in!!
take care doll!
~d
Really wanted the ideal here to be a "no toys needed- when it's good" example.
Thankies fer the stop-in!!
take care doll!
~d
17th May 2015 3:02pm
Excellent use of imagery. I could feel the heat and anticipate the explosion. Well done.
17th May 2015 3:59pm
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19th May 2015 1:42pm
22nd May 2015 8:54am
WoW! and I rarely say wow in my comments... this really blew me away! A very sexy write without all the dirty words, this is not only how I like to see erotica written, but how I strive to write it myself. I think mine falls short of this. Impressively creative and seductive... I always make it a point to read the first poem a poet posts first because I think that it is the poem the artist wants to make their first impression with and this made a real impression on me. jj
6th Jun 2015 10:09am
And lookey who I find here..so this is the beginning JJ, had no idea of the 'updates button
at time. sor-rees man. *kiss
Love that you appreciate the very essence of what I was going for here.
Insightful brilliant you,'splainin' it better than I would. ty-ty
~d
at time. sor-rees man. *kiss
Love that you appreciate the very essence of what I was going for here.
Insightful brilliant you,'splainin' it better than I would. ty-ty
~d
6th Jun 2015 8:29pm
