Cloud-castle (Renku)

I like the form of this poem and the way you fit the words into it. Sometimes cloud castles are wonderful places to hide. I enjoyed this very much.

I'm not sure whether to like cloud-castles or not. Depends on the person you share them with. But I thank you so much for enjoying the poem :-)!

lighting strikes

That's all we need :-)!

Nothing wrong with it
No neighbours disturbing the
Cloud-castle's silence

Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Silence? Not really.
Thanks, app77, for your kind comment.

I see to be a cloud castle ground's keeper. Well done Miss Chi!

Thank you Gahddess_Worship :-). Would be a nice job, wouldn't it? Give the clouds some fluffing up now and then and that's about all!

Yes it would...it would plenty of time to become a killer harpist :)

I guess you're both just floating the idea..:)

it's a lovely poem...

Thanks, dear Paul.
You're right, I'm not talking about something substantial :-).

Castle without a foundation?

Yes, dear (Hey! Love to see you here again! Missed you!), to this day ...

There's nothing wrong with existing in the clouds ... Hovering above it all.  This reminds me how important it is for lovers to see the possibility in each other ... And themselves as one.

Lovely.

You're right from your point of view. Your concept of cloud-castleing is pretty awesome :-). I like it!

Excellent construction...
Different format to what I normally read.

It's just three connected haiku (renku), sadsmiles :-), but I'm happy you like them! Thanks for your kind words!

This creates visual images of shape shifting clouds.

Yes, Faye, that's a good idea! Makes me think of cloud-castle dwellers moving pieces of furniture, reshaping cloud nine :-).

Special!Very good write!

Thank you, Gabi! Glad you like it!

Always preferred castles of cloud to castles of sand - more hope than desperation I suspect

Wise write on clinging to impermanence - it's not love that holds these protagonists together but seeping inertia

The most solid thing here is your poetic form :)

You can build at least upon my constant poetic form :-), whale!  
 
Thank you for your wise words! No, it's not love that holds the protagonists together but inertia either. Was thinking more of forbidden lust ... But it's fascinating to see that a poem inspires its readers differently :-).

this is the time when the mind & heart struggle against each other...

Absolutly, dear John. Broken rules, no promises ... Nice to look at, those cloud-castles, but anything but promising to live in. Thanks for your kind comment!

i can visualize those beautiful cloud castles … just floating along, all is well till the storm hits

beautifully written conundrum :)

Thanks, JeJe! Beautiful though transient...

so perfectly framed!

Thanks, Jazz. You know that I like the haiku format :-).

Wonderful.... Building, seeking, dwelling... Stylish... Activities between the storms?

Sorry for answering so late! Swamped ...

Thank you for your really wonderful comment, jvp! Stylish - wow *blushandhappy* :-).