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SO FAR SO GOOD
tags:EDELTRAUD ==> DISMANTLING BIG TIME ==> (?)
"OLD OAK TREE"
Southall
Wednesday afternoon
13/5/2015
SO FAR SO GOOD
So far so good,
feelings that we can manage no more brute,
if something goes amiss we know its root,
so far so good.
This spring fragile,
offers some words of substance for a while,
perhaps we could exchange even a smile,
also fragile.
And leave it there,
as common legacy that we could bear,
reviewing pictures past the fate we dare,
just leave it up to there.
So far so good,
I'm still mr Unknown, you're still miss Cute,
no need for plans, we'll make them en route,
so far so good.
"OLD OAK TREE"
Southall
Wednesday afternoon
13/5/2015
SO FAR SO GOOD
So far so good,
feelings that we can manage no more brute,
if something goes amiss we know its root,
so far so good.
This spring fragile,
offers some words of substance for a while,
perhaps we could exchange even a smile,
also fragile.
And leave it there,
as common legacy that we could bear,
reviewing pictures past the fate we dare,
just leave it up to there.
So far so good,
I'm still mr Unknown, you're still miss Cute,
no need for plans, we'll make them en route,
so far so good.
Published 14th May 2015
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Anonymous
14th May 2015 12:55pm
21 out of 42 poets agree that this poem makes one think of anything but spring.
14th May 2015 3:28pm
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