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Blissful, controlled Mutilation.
She'll do as she's told, as I hold the blade. Shining as it does .. Debts to be pain.
She'll try to escape this adrenaline ball. She wants this too, she's hooked - it's true.
I hold the tool with my right, and slice up her left ... She'll cover it for sure. I'll make her for the best.
I own her mind. Its a gift for sure. She'll run for a while. But come back for more.
I know she wants it, the blood on her arms. I'll help her out gladly, with the blade's potent charms.
When I mutilate her flesh, she forgets her strife. Soon she'll want more ... Perhaps a knife.
On to that later, I plan to cut now for you see, I can do what I want ... For 'she' is me.
She'll try to escape this adrenaline ball. She wants this too, she's hooked - it's true.
I hold the tool with my right, and slice up her left ... She'll cover it for sure. I'll make her for the best.
I own her mind. Its a gift for sure. She'll run for a while. But come back for more.
I know she wants it, the blood on her arms. I'll help her out gladly, with the blade's potent charms.
When I mutilate her flesh, she forgets her strife. Soon she'll want more ... Perhaps a knife.
On to that later, I plan to cut now for you see, I can do what I want ... For 'she' is me.
Published 14th May 2015
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14th May 2015 2:45am
I find this one really sad, makes me want to cry
:-(
it's really well written with power and strong images - but it still makes me sad :-(
:-(
it's really well written with power and strong images - but it still makes me sad :-(
14th May 2015 12:10pm
It is sad and I thank you for your sympathy ... But try not to be sad for me its all self infliccted :'(
16th May 2015 10:15am
Not sure why, but reading this gave me a bit of a rush (maybe I'm just strange)
16th May 2015 11:52am
Gave me a rush to write tbh ... Your not strange the poem is a depiction of control and weakness together ... Fairly understandable Creepy :3
