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Brainstorm
She's Mistress and Muse
Then Sister Hyde
Inspiration through the day
Then licentious thoughts at night
Her hand guiding mine even now
Coaxing me to deliver
Just a few more lines
Which she reads with a critical eye
"Nice try!" she exults
Zipping free from her leather dress
Permitting admiration of her perfect skin
Then positive reinforcement in our bed
"Looks like a winner to me!" she chuckles
Stroking it to life
Then allowing entrance
Until the next brainstorm arrives.
Then Sister Hyde
Inspiration through the day
Then licentious thoughts at night
Her hand guiding mine even now
Coaxing me to deliver
Just a few more lines
Which she reads with a critical eye
"Nice try!" she exults
Zipping free from her leather dress
Permitting admiration of her perfect skin
Then positive reinforcement in our bed
"Looks like a winner to me!" she chuckles
Stroking it to life
Then allowing entrance
Until the next brainstorm arrives.
Published 12th May 2015
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12th May 2015 6:08pm
Nice one Crowfly! Always nice to have a little support and encouragement, from where ever it may come ;)
12th May 2015 6:58pm
Anonymous
12th May 2015 7:02pm
Well first off, the title, "Brainstorm" makes me think of Christopher Walken; and secondly, it makes me think of my Ex! Thanks for the trip down memory lane;). . .xoxo, Devlin.
12th May 2015 7:08pm
I get a kick out of Christopher Walken, one of my favorite actors. I know he gives some the creeps and I take no responsibility. But "Brainstorm," the movie, is a piece of crap. I don't know about your ex of course. I'll try to stay out of his way.
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12th May 2015 7:37pm
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13th May 2015 00:52am
Hmmmm.... I'll try to think of another title. "Brainquake"? Too close. I'll keep trying....
12th May 2015 7:48pm
13th May 2015 00:58am
Anonymous
12th May 2015 8:12pm
i'm a pretty good editor and offer fantastic constructive criticism. should that be required. ;)
nice little write, crow!
nice little write, crow!
13th May 2015 00:58am
12th May 2015 8:47pm
This girl, Crow. Seems a little devious. A little playful. She sounds like a great way for you to whittle the time away. Love this. As always.
13th May 2015 1:00am
Anonymous
12th May 2015 10:33pm
sounds like one hell of a muse, crowfly. loved the pace of this piece
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