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Am I? can i?
Am I crazy, or was that a crazy thing to do?
Pushed my friends away to paint the sky a deeper shade of blue.
Am I crazy, or just dancing with insanity?
I loathe myself, but still place others in the bottom drawer
beneath the vanity.
Am I sane, or have my inner demons taken over?
Getting harder throughout each day
to maintain my own composure.
Am I still sane, or can I just let go?
Take it all off and walk out,
leaving footprints in the snow.
Pushed my friends away to paint the sky a deeper shade of blue.
Am I crazy, or just dancing with insanity?
I loathe myself, but still place others in the bottom drawer
beneath the vanity.
Am I sane, or have my inner demons taken over?
Getting harder throughout each day
to maintain my own composure.
Am I still sane, or can I just let go?
Take it all off and walk out,
leaving footprints in the snow.
Published 9th May 2015
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10th May 2015 5:41pm
personally - I think you probably are crazy - but then what's wrong with crazy :-)
excellent write - love the rhyming scheme
:-)
excellent write - love the rhyming scheme
:-)
11th May 2015 1:17am
Says the man with the spiky hat to the monkey lol. Thanks for the comment David
14th Sep 2015 7:51pm
14th Sep 2015 9:41pm
28th Nov 2015 00:48am
If only my insanity would have the courage to walk away! Deeply, emotionally provoking! Loved it👣!
