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Fuck Lust
Lust is an abomination
It needs eradicating
It needs replaced
For lust without love
Is meaningless and wrong
It is emptiness
It only leads to death
There is a better way
Give me Love

Fuck Gluttony
You fat shit
Get on a diet
Loose some weight
Moving from meal to meal
With a pigs appetite
And a pot belly
It only leads to death
Give me Temperance

Fuck Greed
The money you amass
Means nothing at all
You have only gained it
Through deliberate cruelty
Standing on the heads of others
Your attitude makes you nasty
It only leads to death
Give me Charity

Fuck Sloth
You lazy bastard
The world owes you nothing
Maybe you should try moving
Of your big fat ass
And do something constructive
At the very least
Do something
It only leads to death
Give me Diligence

Fuck Wrath
Why so angry?
Small penis?
Feeling inadequate?
Filled with Ire
Your act is childish
One day your head will explode
It only leads to death
Give me Patience


Fuck Envy
Dry your eyes
Stop whimpering
Seeking the things
That others have
And you do not
You are green and twisted
Jealousy just burns
It only leads to death
Give me Kindness

Fuck Pride
You’re not that great
Quite insignificant
You think you’re important
But you’re not
Get your ego in check
Have a reality check
You are heading for a fall
It only leads to death
Give me Humility
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